Tell Me True- Jensquare Original!

Goodbye, writers block! And good riddance. I do not wish to ever see you again. So after starting and not finishing oh...approximately 6 songs, I finally completed this one. Let me know what you think! :)

Lyrics:

You've got me soaring
You've got me down

They say you're a statue
All barriers down

We walk toward you
But when we hold out a hand
The curtain drops and you're on the road again

They say you're a painting
Just for display

You draw us in
But we're not allowed to stay

Your colors: bold
"No photographs please
We can't risk fading"
You risk fading from my memory

Chorus:
So tell me quick
And tell me true
Are they wrong?
Or is this really you?

They say you're a staircase
One thousand years old

One hundred stories
About you have been told

Will you hold up?
Is for them to speculate
But for my sake, I hope it's not too late

They say you're a puzzle
Pieces in my hand

I almost finish
Then I see I never can

Missing one piece
Is like missing them all
And I need more than art for my wall

Tell me quick
And tell me true
Are they wrong?
Or is this really you?

Tag ending:
Today show me the truth
You can't love anything for long
When today it is here and the next day gone

Category:

Music

Tags:

• jensquare
• original
• song
• tell
• me
• true

[serenataorg]

Very nice, being truthful and honest are interesting subjects to write about!

[o0JenSquare0o]

Why thank you!

[stymie555]

Amazing, as all your songs are! Glad to hear the writers block is over. As you can see by your comments we all enjoy your music.

[o0JenSquare0o]

You are too kind. Thank you for listening, as always.:)

[tdgx3]

ahhmayyzinggg. like seriously.

speechless (:

[o0JenSquare0o]

Thank you so much. I am glad you like it.

[zadfairy]

"The English major in my wants to point out that ..."

Is it the English major in "my"? or, is it "in me"?

See? everybody makes mistakes. =)

[Normalyme]

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ooh my good.. it's really beautiful.. you have a really good voice...=)

[T3cHNo10GiC]

Wow. Your voice is purity itself. Thank you for the beautiful song. What chords are you playing?

[dana601960]

Damn girl you sound like an angle

[jackylee1988]

your voice is beautiful!!

[LilRippy]

I absolutely love this song <3 It is so beautiful.

[daveylaws]

The English major in my wants to point out that speaking grammatically, it should be: "quickly" and "truly". Beyond that, I liked the song. Have you ever tried any breakdown sections in your songs, such as maybe the introduction of some minor chords and a change in pace/"strum (or whatever passes from strum on a piano?) I think that would add another level to you music.  A level of pensive sadness....

[grimscar]

Wow, what an awesome voice and song. Where's the CD? :P

[m4dm013]

amazing. how do you do it?

brilliant results every time.