lol umm...no. if anything you should step your game up. you have the rhyme scheme of a 10 year old boy writing poetry for his english class. 'fling and thing'. wow..real technical. more experienced rappers use something called assonance. for ex: jay z rhymed 'fight and life'. similar to my 'grave and fade' or 'lost and closet'. i could write an essay about how horrible that diss was and how you lossed. so you got the idea, dont respond..you'll get crushed even more
id reply but you rhymed grave with fade and lost it with closet...you did my job for my nig. step your game up. that shit was weak as hell u lil wayne wannabe
I wuld kill this beat
iYungDrizzle 1 year ago
does anyone know where to get the instumental on this
LAXLIFE1821 1 year ago
sooo how much money are you makin compared to him? bitch
graffwriter101 2 years ago
zombie nation
its a techno song
graffwriter101 2 years ago
is this song new???????
itstimefortruth 2 years ago
nice instrumental and samples!!
nilextrem 2 years ago
lol umm...no. if anything you should step your game up. you have the rhyme scheme of a 10 year old boy writing poetry for his english class. 'fling and thing'. wow..real technical. more experienced rappers use something called assonance. for ex: jay z rhymed 'fight and life'. similar to my 'grave and fade' or 'lost and closet'. i could write an essay about how horrible that diss was and how you lossed. so you got the idea, dont respond..you'll get crushed even more
eastsideconnect133 2 years ago
id reply but you rhymed grave with fade and lost it with closet...you did my job for my nig. step your game up. that shit was weak as hell u lil wayne wannabe
kushbythe7 2 years ago
the only thing im diggin is ya muthafuckin grave/
i buzz my hair but im a dude you cant fade/
look for it kush, because i just lost it/
your rap was so gay i had to read it in my closet/
keep it commin. i'll trash you again if ya want
eastsideconnect133 2 years ago
eastsideconnect133 DISS
they say one man's trash is another man's treasure/
..that's y i got ur bitch butt naked on my leather//
yea. she call me for that mclovin fling//
i'm blowing smoke rings while she blowin on my other thing//
dig it?
kushbythe7 2 years ago