Sam Archer 1

My first film.
This is a character named after an amalgamation of Sam Spade and Miles Archer, the two fictional detectives from the origonal noir...The Maltese Falcon. It was made as a project for university and recieved high marks. Comments would be most welcome. I already know most of the faults with it but it doesn't hurt to have more opinions.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• detective
• noir
• p.i
• short
• film
• student
• first
• sam
• archer
• B&W
• black
• and
• white
• mystery
• Pitchshifter
• stop
• talking
• so
• loud

[Insigsource]

Thanks man. I'm gonna be posting another one up soon. It'll be a different style, but the same character will be used. Should be done in about 3 weeks...So I'll have it up by then.

[Insigsource]

Comments would be much appreciated as it will help me improve any areas I haven't caught myself.

[sta1V1ina]

Wow, i was searching for this song and i found this masterpiece, really, really enjoyed it.

[Mithrandir254]

Nice work, I liked the classic Private I dialog. Keep it up man.

[marblefly]

'lo tharr.

Friend of allan's, i found this video on his journal thing...

Its pretty neat, I wanted to ask you, which is the song you used?

All's pretty well, the only thing i recommend is that maybe you could use more than just one song in it -- in the parts where it just looped, it started to sound a tad monotonous, you could possibly switch to another song, like, suspenseful or whatever, and then switch back or something...

And yeah, is it an american accent?

good job neway :)

[coydo7]

since u are looking for comments

1: is that an American accent u have

2: where's he shaggin

3:a spent 8 minutes tryin tae turn the colour up oan ma laptop

4:why are ye talkin aboot poofs

5:pool???? youre shite at pool

6: why did ye no ask me tae star in it

7: havent caught myself,havent caught myself,havent caught myself, u takin the pish , too mutch uni old boy

ps i am availible for hetrosexual nude scenes( that means wae burds)

hope my comments help

[DFlynn666]

Nice work, good story, and a had a good laugh at some points - usin black and white was a brill idea. Make some more episodes - a series would b good.