Good hook!! Your speech was really clear and easy to understand. When you moved you crossed your feet a little bit. When you thought about what to say next you lost your eye contact. But it was a really good job. You controlled you timing under 10 minutes. Really well done!!
I think this topic is really good. your speech was smooth, so it was easy to understand. The way of volunteer was nice so we could understand. But I think if you changed color of every paper, it was better. I didn’t know when we needed the rest of stuff. But your speech was nice!!
My speaking speed and volume are pretty good and my props are helpful to understand my audiences. However, I need to control the time because I had to skip how to set dessert part. I did change my plan after checking the time, it was good but I have to manage my speech time more carefully. And it will be better to mention about my audiences when they follow my direction very well. I can do better next time.
Good hook!! Your speech was really clear and easy to understand. When you moved you crossed your feet a little bit. When you thought about what to say next you lost your eye contact. But it was a really good job. You controlled you timing under 10 minutes. Really well done!!
aqbear 3 weeks ago
I think this topic is really good. your speech was smooth, so it was easy to understand. The way of volunteer was nice so we could understand. But I think if you changed color of every paper, it was better. I didn’t know when we needed the rest of stuff. But your speech was nice!!
Ayasa218 3 weeks ago
My speaking speed and volume are pretty good and my props are helpful to understand my audiences. However, I need to control the time because I had to skip how to set dessert part. I did change my plan after checking the time, it was good but I have to manage my speech time more carefully. And it will be better to mention about my audiences when they follow my direction very well. I can do better next time.
yangyoung48 3 weeks ago