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The original song I used is "Kill Everybody" by Skrillex and I do not claim any ownership. I in no way intend copyright infringement and the ownership belongs to WMG. I am using this for personal use, critique, commenting, and education.
Lyrics: Hello everybody, Insanatey is here
So keep on listening if you got ears and if ya fearless
hear this, because you dont wanna miss
it's like we're playing battleship hoping for a big hit
caution tape all around my body,
If you cross the line i promise you'll be sorry
Cause this land is your land, and this land is my land
But the flag im holding belongs to shutter island
So you should be worried if you see that im smilin
If I were you I'd be 911 dialin
Im wylin and im young just like Kid Cudi
Even though im solo dolo he's my buddy
Got an angel on the left and a devil on the right
But both shoulders are telling me to go start a fight
Voices in my head, wish i could drop this call
It's pokemon with a twist. I gotta kill em all
No seriously tho, I think about it all the time
Insanatey dont admit that, have you lost your damn mind?
I use rap as a form of self expression
So i dont give a shit about using discretion
The aggression is becoming a bit of an obsession
I'll take my depression and use it as a lesson
Nah Ill skip class I think I'll learn something new
How to kill everybody, yes even you.
My girlfriend said that i need to text her
but im busy with a knife playing a game called Dexter
Most of my life I caged the beast inside
There's no more Doctor Jeckyll, you can call me Mr Hyde.
Im out at a party taking shots of liquor
My body feels fine but my mind's getting sicker
People all around me leave my side
They're starting to see the anger in my eyes
AC/DC only shoots to thrill but I want to kill
maybe just the guilty, the innocent get spared
Ill shake an eight ball, cant decide if i should care
Indecisive, like a girl who wonders what to wear
If life is so cruel why should I have to be fair?
Got a splinter in my brain that i cant seem to shake
I feel like ms Doubtfire, acting normal feels fake
Cant tell my secret like Walt from Breaking bad
Except mine isnt that i run a meth lab
And everybody's got a dark secret to tell
It'll burn a hole in your pocket and drag you to hell
So I took a shovel out, now my anger's buried deep
Dont make a peep, cause I put it to sleep
Like heat in the air i can feel the wrath rise
I want to ignore it and shut my eyes
But like A clockwork orange they wont even close
Held open by a mechanism controlled by foes
I dont use substances to cope
The only help i need is a loop and a rope
im looking for hope but i cant seem to find it
Watch my life on the screen but I cant rewind it
And i cant escape it so i have to fake it.
Or maybe i should sit back and video tape it
Like the Truman show Im feeling controlled
so i break the mold and i wont do what im told
Sharing is an important part of living
I received all this pain well i better start giving
I want to kill everyone, i want a fresh start
An empty world except for one beating heart
If God is real then he's a serial killer
Break the pearly gates and ill climb onto pillar
I'l look him in the eyes and bow down as his slave
Then ill ask for a weapon and take the lives that he gave
Im not the first, there's famine and war
pestilence and death, they're all knocking at your door
There's more, but those are just the first four
but believe it or not ive never been one for gore
So i'll make a quick stroke, all i need is a knife
Better yet, ill ask the Grim reaper for his scythe
I'll do his dirty work you can call me Mike Rowe
Who knew i was crazy? I didnt even know
Well I knew, say the voices in my brain
They call me insane but i know they're playing games
Or maybe all i really need is to take a pill but I just
For the theme of the song it was a bit to Vanilla Ice. Your flow was good but you need to increase the intensity in your tone. I would like you to see you do this over with more rage like how Eminem raps. I am not saying you should be Eminem, but say the words with some energy and anger where you carry the music instead of the music carrying you. I gave you a thumbs up.
scottyphoto 5 months ago
@scottyphoto Very good feedback, thanks man. I'll definitely take this into consideration when recording
Insanatey 5 months ago