Hey Jimmy - My own Comp

Hey Guys! This right here is my own composition that I made when I was 18. It is a Rock/Punk song, an amateurish acoustic version of the song that I plan to use as a single on my album,God Willing. It is a christian song and is about a conversation between God and a guy named Jimmy. Please let me know your views about the song. Feel free to criticize and find any faults coz I want to learn from a third party opinion how the song sounds. Apart from that enjoy the song, God Bless and Rock On !..!

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[streethkemm]

Bridge: - I'm falling, I'm broken and I know that Ive made me what I am

I'm hurting , It's a horrible feeling and I know that Iv'e made me what I am

Slow Bridge: -

Then I looked into your eyes

I saw you really cared.

You made me see the light

I will love you all my life

Chorus : (twice and soft)

[streethkemm]

!st Verse: - Im Walking all over you I know that I am wrong I'm gonna let you go But there's somethin in me that's tellin me Chorus: - Hey Jimmy Whatever you do You know that ill always love you and Though this world has much to offer You can always come back Coz I Loved you from the beginning Verse 2: - I fail to Understand, Why I always keep hurting you It's just that I'm just a man and I cant see Through your flowing compassion saying Chorus:

[ashicecool]

Brother, great song. A little advice mate, put up the lyrics of the song in man. That would make it even better.

[streethkemm]

@ashicecool Plannin to do that bro :)



[atulfelix]

great song about redemption, post the lyrics :P

[streethkemm]

@atulfelix Gonna post the lyrics soon :)

[streethkemm]

@passionhunterz9186 ..thnx a lot bro :)!

[passionhunterz9186]

This is Yameen

[passionhunterz9186]

Yameen

[passionhunterz9186]

Good job buddy.. Well sung..:)