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hilarious.
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of course i understand that you were nervous as shit when first doing such a stand-up. but anyways i wanted to post some constructive criticism. you really should take longer breaks between your punchlines. when the crowd is laughing, let them laugh for a while and then continue. chappelle for example takes extreme long breaks while laughing himself. this laugh projects on the crowd and they laugh even harder. youll need less jokes and the crowds happier. win-win :)
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Good set bro! You got my coveted ushouldbacomedian without the " constructive" or as some would call it " soul crushing shit on my dreams and then show me a video of you getting your salad tossed by my mom" criticism. Very funny comic.
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11/10
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Good stuff man. You're funny.
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awesome!
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nice job man you got potential
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It's like watching Comedy Central Presents....without all the jokes.
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first time? What great potential man that was an awesome set. Keep on going man!!
solid set
barrytelium 1 year ago 12
"that's some nice PSI you got goin on there...nice pee pressure, you've improved since last time" xD
"i'm just sayin, she's a whore."
"i learned how to pleasure a woman on yahoo answers." xD !!!!
"they go off-beat, i swear to God." hahaha!! good stuff!
AsToldByEsme 1 year ago 5