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Uploaded by on Apr 30, 2010

Ehh.. okay i lied this isnt the first ep. lol but its the begining of the first ep. something you should read! I had the first whole ep on here at first but i didnt like somethings so im gonna go back and change some things so this is all it will be for now. My friend on youtube Mjceleb said its really good. she read the whole first episode or like half. idk if you read her stories but she is good.

In this story im basically working on my writing like the way i write it.

Joe looked towards the lake seeing his wife hold his son to her breast. His heart flooded with joy. God had actually answered his prayers and finally gave him his wife and kids back. He walked closer towards them his heart beat racing faster and faster at every inch closer he got towards his family. She turn towards him and his heart stop all it was her but he couldnt see her face clearly nor his sons. His heart sank. He reached for her but just missed appeared and everything went dark. Joe couldnt help himself, he sobbed for a few minutes cursing god. Joe felt a light tap on his shoulder and then she appeared again "Joseph.. its time to let us go. You promised you find someone new to love if i died. Now just look at you!" Joe wrapped his arms around his chest to resist the urge to touch her again." I can't, Demi. I know i promised, but i can't! I'll never love anyone but you! Never.." his vioce began to crack "Never Demi.." Her voice rang with sadness. "Oh, Joe, you can't go on like this. Life is a precious gift and your wasting it!" He closed his eyes "i dont have a life Demi.. not with out you and Keeth, I'm just marking off the days. Why can't you understand that?" "Its time Joe, its time to let us go and move on.." she paused for a couple minutes letting the silence fill the air. "You keep praying for one more chance." she murmured. "Well, dear heart, now your getting one. Don"t throw it away or mess it up cause your still clinging to ghost."
"Mess what up?"
"You'll see" he heard a smile in her voice "just open your heart, joe you'll see"

He woke up clutching the whiskey to his stomache. He looked down letting one tear fall from his face. He brung the whiskey up to his mouth taking gulp. He looked around the boxcart seeing the same four guys who had been on the train for the last two days they were looking towards the left. Something out of the corner of his left eye caught his attention. The moon light fell over her body. He could see she was a beauty, slightly built, and had that rare milk-white skin you would only see in pictures, but seldom run across in real life. Pushing with the heel of one boot, he sat more erect and turned the full blast of his gaze on her. She had the most gorgeous seaweed green eyes Joe had ever layed his eyes upon. The girl was hugging her jacket. Joe was so confused, why would she hug her jacket instead of putting it on it must have been almost below zero. What in the right mine was she thinking getting in a boxcart full of four sex-starved men. Joe snorted at the unintentional pun and curled his hand over the neck of the whiskey bottle. Thank god she wasnt his problem. He was to drunk to help her out if things got ugly, and he planned to get drunker before the night was finished. If there was a code for bumming the rails it was to mine your own business. The little lady was on her own.
He tipped back his head to swig the whiskey. The blessed burn promised obilvion, and he closed his eyes as the warmth spread through him. Tomorrow he find an odd job and buy aniother bottle before this one went dry. When he was drunk he was happy cause then he couldnt think, about Demi.


This will be posted on lg090794 channel its my other channel subsribe please :D and sorry if mistakes. wanna help pick the name just put a name down in the comment box below. oh yeah sorry trust me im working on jiley story!

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  • I really love it! nice job :)

  • OMJ! you posted it! argh! I'm so happy. *happy dancing* it's great hun, really really great! No kidding. Aww you just made my day!

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