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Uploaded by DillyEva on Dec 11, 2006
:30 ad contest entry - check it out at http://dovecreamoil.living.aol.com
Entertainment
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not good
EditMonsterKurt 5 years ago
boring?
Dezireble 5 years ago
Font and all needs replacing, transitions were unprofessional. Good effort.
darkninjamark 5 years ago 2
wtff I work at walgreens and its not even in stores yet
oooALICEooo 5 years ago
thats not a go buy me advert.. sounds like someone died
mazz2000 5 years ago
Didnt like the font, music, or concept. You tried hard, but I'd do something else.
NoButIDoHaveHerpes 5 years ago
Good comments. This seemed rushed to me--I could not connect with what you were trying to get across. Curiouslyso also provided instructive advice as well. Good luck.
lfhowell1 5 years ago
Use a different font and fix the typo and make it have a concept instead of just jumbling up their video clips
curiouslyso 5 years ago
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not good
EditMonsterKurt 5 years ago
boring?
Dezireble 5 years ago
Font and all needs replacing, transitions were unprofessional. Good effort.
darkninjamark 5 years ago 2
wtff I work at walgreens and its not even in stores yet
oooALICEooo 5 years ago
thats not a go buy me advert.. sounds like someone died
mazz2000 5 years ago
Didnt like the font, music, or concept. You tried hard, but I'd do something else.
NoButIDoHaveHerpes 5 years ago
Good comments. This seemed rushed to me--I could not connect with what you were trying to get across. Curiouslyso also provided instructive advice as well. Good luck.
lfhowell1 5 years ago
Use a different font and fix the typo and make it have a concept instead of just jumbling up their video clips
curiouslyso 5 years ago