A song I wrote last year =)
My first 'good one' that I ever wrote.. hehe!
Enjoy !
LYRICS:
[verse]
If I could tell you my secrets..
where would I start?
Because I'm not hearing your voice,
it's breaking my heart.
If you could tell me anything,
what would it be?
Would you open up your heart
and pour it all out to me?
When you open your mouth,
what would you say?
What happened to us..
to end up this way?
[CHORUS]
Sometimes I don't feel like me anymore
On the inside I'm fighting a war
Between my heart and all my other feelings
Will someone just tell me where it ends?
[verse]
If you could spend one last day with me..
Would it still be the same you that I'd see?
I wish I could tell you, I cannot lie.
I miss all those memories, that've now gone by..
[CHORUS]
Sometimes I don't feel like me anymore
On the inside I'm fighting a war
Between my heart and all my other feelings
Will someone just tell me where it ends...?
Where it ends?
Why does every Jessica I see Look amazing and have the ability to sing?
TravisMaxima 2 years ago
your awesome i luvv uu
20cutie02 2 years ago
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
cahman44 2 years ago
I don't get why you don't have more views.
Alexsau 2 years ago
we have the worlds next superstar! that was amazing!
angie4josh 3 years ago
Very good child...5 Stars!!!
Great job on the lyrics and performance. The more you sing the more control you will have on your voice, which is already showing great promise.
I love to see young people who pen their own lyrics. A mark of the creative... Stick with it kideo!!!
groberson2007 3 years ago
wow ! This is awesome .! this is not the kind of music that i listen but this is good !! Its different than metal ^^
ripcordz35 3 years ago
Omg, I can't believe you don't have more views, comments and subscribers. You have ahuge talent, and I'm sure you'll make it big one day.
Your voice is almost perfect, but it would be even better of you got some vocaltraining. But still, - your better than the most of people here on youtube!
keep uploading your videos, I'll tell my friends about you =]
you diffinately got a new fan in Denmark, scandinavia (:
good luck!
Mia
MiiaAiim 3 years ago
what a cool cat! ;)
goliath182dave 3 years ago
Oh my god...you are a star in the making.
You must be influenced by a true rock god...someone like an awesome uncle, or similar :)
Keep at it puddin' head.....YOU RAWK!! (even if you do only do love songs) :)
JimFook 3 years ago