amhi prem karto.............tiraskar nahi ki ........badala nahi.......amhi.......1kda prem kele ki te aaush bhar japto........ani ti nehamich sakaratmak aasel.........amhi bhik magat nahi............ani kunala hi tras det nahi....
aho jatiywadachya baher ya jara. mala kahi ghena nahi te kadam ahet ki ankhi koni.
barech lok gaadi bhaltya rulawar nevun ka taktat samjat nahi.
mala prem samjale nasel kadachit, pun lagna howun gelelya maitirnichya darasamor mi bheek magat basen ase mala watat nahi.
to ek sundar bhootkaal hota, ani ata ti dusrya konachi tari ahe, mag tichya navya ayushyat dhavladhaval apan karnar nahi. tila khoop shubhechcha devu, bas. aple dukkh aplyashi.
wahhhhhhhhhh
parabnarayan1 4 weeks ago
!!!!!!!!!!!1 sahi bhai.............
amitmatondkar 2 months ago
@sudheerbarve
manuvadatun aapan baher aave hich apeksha................
amhi prem karto.............tiraskar nahi ki ........badala nahi.......amhi.......1kda prem kele ki te aaush bhar japto........ani ti nehamich sakaratmak aasel.........amhi bhik magat nahi............ani kunala hi tras det nahi....
96640663 5 months ago
Bakwaas chi height ahe hi kawita !!!
sagarchandratrey 7 months ago
jagayas teva khara arth hota.... soumitra chya yasarkhya kavita khoop uchch darjachya ahet, waad nahi.
sudheerbarve 7 months ago
@96640663
aho jatiywadachya baher ya jara. mala kahi ghena nahi te kadam ahet ki ankhi koni.
barech lok gaadi bhaltya rulawar nevun ka taktat samjat nahi.
mala prem samjale nasel kadachit, pun lagna howun gelelya maitirnichya darasamor mi bheek magat basen ase mala watat nahi.
to ek sundar bhootkaal hota, ani ata ti dusrya konachi tari ahe, mag tichya navya ayushyat dhavladhaval apan karnar nahi. tila khoop shubhechcha devu, bas. aple dukkh aplyashi.
aso.
sudheerbarve 7 months ago
jabardast..............................
96640663 7 months ago
@sudheerbarve khup chan jamali ki te kadam aahet mahanun nahi jamli
96640663 7 months ago
@sudheerbarve aplyala kadhi khare pram zhalech nahi vatte..................
96640663 7 months ago
kasli kavita ho hi,
athawaninchi bheek magat baslela ha..
ani tyachi lagna howun geleli juni maitrin.
ti mhanat asel..
." tuzya athwaninchi laktare deun takli boharinila gelya pawsalyat, ani ghetlay ek wadga. tuzyasathi .. please mazya khidkishi thambat jau nakos."
chhand nahi, anupras, yamak nahi, meter nahi. nuste gadya gayan ani jogwa.
sudheerbarve 9 months ago