This made me giggle a little. I know you meant it to be sad and beautiful and melancholic, but...it needs a few improvements. For one thing, how on earth did her shirt and bra get lifted up and breasts exposed when her sweatpants remained perfectly in place? As for storyline, you need a bit of the love story part in the beginning, so viewers can get attached, and then be shocked when he kills her. And he'd probably have to go through something shocking first. Good luck with your future endeavors
haha, we made this waay back when i was 17 for film studies project (no breasts were shown in that version) and then me and my friend re-edited it because he wanted to see boobs...that's the only reason you see boobs!
we'd never used a video camera at the time, and yes it's badly cut together and you can clearly see her moving...but that's all part of the cheesy fun of this video :)
it's okay to laugh at it, it's not meant to be a serious drama just a''for the sake of it'' kinda film lol
it's the whole ''if i can't have you, no one can'' scenario so he has killed he and is dragging her because the weight of his guilt is too heavy to carry
So, Benny was right in not trusting Joon's boyfriend.
MORKOS621 11 months ago
@MORKOS621 haha very true
grundy2k 11 months ago
This made me giggle a little. I know you meant it to be sad and beautiful and melancholic, but...it needs a few improvements. For one thing, how on earth did her shirt and bra get lifted up and breasts exposed when her sweatpants remained perfectly in place? As for storyline, you need a bit of the love story part in the beginning, so viewers can get attached, and then be shocked when he kills her. And he'd probably have to go through something shocking first. Good luck with your future endeavors
elfflower1989 1 year ago
haha, we made this waay back when i was 17 for film studies project (no breasts were shown in that version) and then me and my friend re-edited it because he wanted to see boobs...that's the only reason you see boobs!
we'd never used a video camera at the time, and yes it's badly cut together and you can clearly see her moving...but that's all part of the cheesy fun of this video :)
it's okay to laugh at it, it's not meant to be a serious drama just a''for the sake of it'' kinda film lol
grundy2k 1 year ago
it's the whole ''if i can't have you, no one can'' scenario so he has killed he and is dragging her because the weight of his guilt is too heavy to carry
grundy2k 2 years ago