The power of a good story
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Did anyone else laugh when the pushy thing shoved him off the tree-chopping conveyor belt?
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all that capitalizing and spelling stuff does not matter. the verb tense does and we learn that too. besides that grammar does not change how weel you write the story. it is based and clean and coherent sentences. english is short and to the point. our class gets the highest scores in the state every year so i think i know what im talking about
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Too bad they couldn't teach you how to capitalize, use correct verb tense, spell, etc. If I were you, I'd ask for my money back...
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im in the best wrighting class in california. my teacher explained that if you can get the reader to belive what they are reading the story will became better. make the store flow by using and and but. and he also told us try not to use the word also because it sounds as if you forgot to add something in ur plot. my teacher is dr.boucher
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On beggining when they shoot on guy, one of them said 1.''Drzi ga mamu mu jebem'' than few seconds later 2.''Jebem ti mater'' haha
Thats nice words in Serbia means :)
1. Catch him, I fuck his mother
2. I fuck your mother
OMG!
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good story
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hahahahaha It´s Awesome!!!
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epic win
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LMFAO
Wonderful. I would love to show it to my writing students! I can think of a dozen exercises off the top of my head! I have seen three hour movies with less plot.
Farzananahid 2 years ago 7
Are you serious about that? Whose sensibilities? The folk of stupid husbands?
Surprise1972 2 years ago