Come Back - Ahmir Contest - Collective

Thank you Ahmir for having this contest. I really loved writing this verse :)

Lyrics:

I remember back in heaven when our love began,
I miss your smile, and the way you held my hand,
Now were far apart and I need you back,
My heart wont beat without you in my grasp/
We were united, all of one in the same,
Try and try again, I fail its insane,
How I never knew love, compared to our way,
I hope I get to meet you, before the heaven gates/
You were my plans, my time, my everything,
Now Im bitter and lonely, and cursing things,
From this cliff, I barely hang,
I shouted out your name, empty echoes rang/
My black heart is broken, and that is the truth,
Separations are tough, but trust me well get through,
Weve been through a lot, just me and you,
And you know? Im nothing without you/

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Ahmir
• Contest
• Virus

[oxorgreat12]

Damn this is good exelent I loved it

[CollectiveFreedom]

Thank you very much :)

[ObScUrEdInFaTuAtIoN]

Loved it! this was absolutly amazing! Good job bud! keep it up :D

[CollectiveFreedom]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that buddy :)

I put my all into this. I feel like my work's been slacking lately honestly haha.

[Yatamare]

0-0 dude im left speechless, man this is amazing!

[CollectiveFreedom]

Ya? Thanks buddy, I appreciate that alot :)

[CollectiveFreedom]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you really liked it :)

[mademgrey]

seriously chilling Collective :D Awesome ^.^

[CollectiveFreedom]

Thank you so much, I appreciate that :)

[ShadowSoulKeeper]

faved for awesomeness