Oceana (Original Song)

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Hey all, fourth song yet. And yes I did change it if by some way you saw the first one.

Lyrics:
Swimming in a blue ocean.
Killing my own conviction.
Seep inside the pulsing wound.
I've grown so numb.

The ocean shyly croons.
Singing a meloncoly tune.
Hearts are taken, washed away.
And suddenly, I can't breath.

A detachment succumbed.
Your life, is marrooned.
My abandon rings true.
From this institution anew.

In the depths, I do swim.
With the octopus of eight limbs.
In the coral collage of rock.
He does not hide.

Save me from myself.
Take a dive.
Escape a hell.
Take a dive.
Let go.
Take a dive.
You won't return.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• oceana
• original
• song
• teenage
• anarchy
• electric
• guitar
• music
• experimental
• alternative

[AndrewConfides]

sounds like nirvana

[TeenageAnarchy]

Lol, yeah, I get that a lot :P

[xChrXisx777]

work on ur vocals a little bro sing from the diaphragm not the throat I liked it but also I think it would have been better with a breakdown and if u would have extended the heavy part more but still I like it :)

[xlapj001]

Without faults - so you are better than me:)...

[abruhkadabruh21]

dude this is pretty badass lol keep it up and sing lowder >:]

[krddovs10]

love this song! i love your voice? wish i could hear you in real life.