Harold Lloyd "A DAY OUT" PART 1

HAROLD LLOYD SILENT MOVIE STAR AND ONE OF MY HEREOS HAS A DAY OUT AT THE PARK WITH MARY (THE GIRL) THIS BEING THEIR SECOND DATE AND AGAIN IN TRYING TO LOOK COOL HAROLD DOESNT REALLY PULL IT OFF. PART 2 WILL BE UP SOON..ISH,PLEASE COMMENT..

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• HAROLD
• LLOYD
• SILENT
• MOVIES
• STUNTS
• FALLING
• RUNNING
• SLAPSTICK
• RAKE
• IN
• THE
• FACE
• PAIN
• ESSEX
• PARK
• WATT
• TYLER
• LAKE
• MEADOWS
• basildon
• sam
• adams
• GIANT
• hamster
• wheel

[SAda940]

hey migodzia, soory about the spelling it aint not as good as what my gramma isnt...but i watched your one upload taking it up to 25 views now....i liked it i thought it was really good.

[EGoody05]

OMG WHO THE **** R U ?

[SAda940]

i guess you and migodzia didnt go much on it....sorry

[dalvar02]

Sorry to break it to you just like that but he wasn't a saint.

[SAda940]

he wasnt a monster either, he made millions happy with his movies...he probably slept around with a few co stars because it was just the done thing back then,alot like now really...

[snipclipandview]

Sam,I think you did a nice job with your video.It has good continuity and everyone does a nice job acting.Nice job of keeping automobiles out of the video (that helped to keep a 1920's feel to it).I liked how you did the dream sequence in black and white and the rest of the video in an amber shade.Editing is good.If I had any critique to throw your way it would be that I did notice a high voltage tower in the background in one of the shots.To everyone else-if you think it's easy,you try it!

[snipclipandview]

Sam,I think you did a nice job with your video.It has good continuity and everyone does a nice job acting.Nice job of keeping automobiles out of the video (that helped to keep a 1920's feel to it).I liked how you did the dream sequence in black and white and the rest of the video in an amber shade.Editing is good.If I had any critique to throw your way it would be that I did notice a high voltage tower in the background in one of the shots.To everyone else-if you think it's easy,you try it!

[TheVirajster]

Misleading...definitely can spot that whoever is acting as Lloyd has not done his homework....mannerisms need work!

[VinnyMonster1]

@migodzia That isn't a Critique, it's just bad mouthing someone. If you wish to make a critique, you point out both the good points and the bad. Then you offer suggestions on how to improve the work.

Just calling someone's work a pseudo artistic pile of crap is not a critique.

And besides, anything from a child's painting to the works of Michaelangelo is art, be it great works or just bad sketching.

[migodzia]

Ps. "MY HEREOS" - check the spelling.

[migodzia]

Clearly you should go back to school and re-learn the very basic of punctuation and spacing between words. After a comma or period there is space, sweetie! Check your own spelling before pontificating about it to someone else. The simple fact is that you published this pseudo artistic pile of crap in to the public domain and it is being viewed by audience. I am free to express my honest opinion. If you can't take a critique, kindly refrain yourself from publishing and littering.

[4MaryAnna]

@migodzia First thing,if you're looking for someones movies.learn how to spell their name right.It's Lloyd with two L's. Harold Lloyd,got it?

Second,you shouldn't bad mouth what you clearly don't understand. The man that made this "A Day Out' and a few other comic shorts,did so,as a tribute. If you don't like it then just go away.

[neatoauctions]

If I could be one person, in all of Hollywood, I'd choose Harold Lloyd.

That said, the look of your Lloyd was great, yet you weren't displaying his mannerisms, yuh might wanna work on those, if you plan on doing more of these. And when Lloyd went into the treadmill, because of its science fiction-looking nature, I thought Harold would exit the other side into another world of a different time. What we received needed to be shortened. Less would have been more.

[mutterschied]

Damn right.