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That was pretty good. I played this in region band years ago
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That was pretty good. I played this in region band years ago
Great job! Just a few constructive comments
1.) Make sure you capture the melody in it's entirety. at about the 0:14 mark the melody should be fa, mi, fa, sol, la, fa, re.
2.) Make sure the part at the 0:19 mark is LIGHT! Remember this is flutes and clarinets.. Even with a brass band, I try to make it sound very light by using one soprano, repieno, and solo cornet in the melody, and horns in the accomp. otherwise VERY good!
macosx406 3 weeks ago
@macosx406 Thanks for the feedback. I've noticed the mistake at 0:14, unfortunately not until after I filmed this. As for 0:19, I went back and forth many times trying to decide on how to write that part. I eventually decided that I liked the sound of the bass part, so that's how it ended up heavy. If I ever get around to redoing this I'll be sure to make that lighter.
Victrevor2 3 weeks ago