Lyrics below:
This song was inspired with the sounds of Led Zeppelin, Robert Plant, David Bowie and Pink Floyd. I wrote this song a month ago and trashed it. When I write songs, I hear what the whole production should sound like. I had to lay some tracks down to see if I had something to work with. I recorded this song quick and its sloppy, it is only being posted as a idea to see if I should record it? I keep thinking it is ok, then I think it sucks!!! lol :) You be the judge and if you have a better name for the song, please tell me. I will rename it and dedicate it to you if I pick your song title. This strange far out love song is kinda different from my other style. I like to try new ideas and be creative. I think its good for a songwriter to keep being original. Peace and Love :) Eric
(verse)
You changed my heart
With the love from your soul
You are the seamstress of my heart
Ang the keeper of my gold
I took my stand
With your wings you did fly in
A key with a feather did fall
I hold it in my hand
(chorus)
This place
Your face
This space
In front of me
Is it really true
Slow dance
Your trance
I need your romance
Im so lost...Im so lost...Im in love with you
(verse)
You touched your star
In the space from inside
The moment did freeze
As I stood alone and cried
I took your path
In the quicksand that you are
Im sinking slowly
Your hand is way too far
(chorus)
(speaking part)
#1 voice: Mission love control, what are we looking for? We dont see anything in view.
#2 voice: ITS IN THE SHAPE OF A BROKEN HEART! DONT YOU KNOW WHAT A BROKEN HEART LOOKS LIKE?
#1 voice: AAAA...affirmative! We see it! Its in our path, what shall we do?
#2 voice: Do like they did to the moon. Shoot a arrow in it and see what happens!
#1 voice: Affirmative! Program love launce in action. Over and out!
(chorus)
Great song! Love the vocals, and it does remind me very much of David Bowie. A good song name...how about "Follow me into the skies"
blistex4 4 months ago
Love your material. Best wishes , The Black Dogz
TheBlackDogz1 10 months ago
Love the song
bwleschert 1 year ago
Love Zeppelin....and love your music.
Carolalwaysfirst 1 year ago
Very Creative. You have an excellent voice! 5****
rosesredvioletsblue 2 years ago
i really did love wonderwoman
charlax7 2 years ago
Are these your vocals Eric??sounds totally different to your voice on every other song..
how come ive missed these songs? :(mmmmmm
how about calling it Slow dance?
xx
angeliesings 2 years ago
I hope you decided to keep the idea. This is real good. I'd love to hear what you end up doing with it when you complete it the way you want to.
Thought I'd try suggest a title, how about "Lost in love for you"?
jabbamp 2 years ago
Really digging this song EJ...Loving those spacey chords....
LadyWeaver 2 years ago
This is great Eric. Wow. "In the quicksand that you are". Definately feeling the Bowie in it.
MsEllieJ 2 years ago