Never Again ♫ FreckleWitch's Contest Entry

Critique is welcome! No flaming.

Story:
The story is told from the dapple gray thoroughbred's point of view. The horse was injured during the race, and he has to end his racing career. He looks back at the thing that was once his passion and yearns to return to it, but he soon realizes he loves the freedom of jumping more. Soon, he is determined to be crowned king of the arena.

Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING EXCEPT THE PLOT LINE/STORY!

Category:

Pets & Animals

Tags:

• Spirit
• Horse
• Productions
• Equestrian
• Contest
• Jumping
• Dressage
• Western
• Eventing

[azm150]

im so gald now a-days that ppl are taking x-racehorses and turning them ino these AMAZING dreesage/jumpers/ eventers/ hunters. they use to just sell them to be slauterd if they didnt win :\

[LoveTyBaldwin]

I know! But, it's great. I ride ex-racers and event-ers down at the barn I ride at. Dave(A retired eventer) is the sweetest horse I've ridden so far.

[Razzle1203]

Nicely made! I like how you ended it.

[LoveTyBaldwin]

Thank you.

[azm150]

lol yeah it's really comforting for me also since we race horses :)