"I Want You" (original song) by Matt Pierce

I got a new recording mic, so I recorded it again.

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girl you're smilin
yea i see you smilin
i'm so weak at the knees
when you are lookin at me

butterflies in my stomach
oh i feel like a wreck
and the next thing i knew
you said you liked me too

prechorus:
so easily (you seem to take)
my breathe away (like it's nothing)
i can finally say
angels are real to me

chorus:
and i'm fall-all-allin for you girl
you got me all-all-all into your world
let's turn off the lights
and watch the stars tonight
cause nothing i could think of
would be more right

so hold me close
i swear i won't let go
cause what you heard was true
yeah baby i want you

verse 2:
oh i'm slippin
girl you got me trippin
up on my own words
this is so absurb

brown hair green eyes
lookin back at me
this is just too good
i mean is it a dream?

*prechorus*
*chorus*

when you
hold my hand
i just can't
comprehend

oh what you're do-
in to me
but so clearly
i can see

*chorus*

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[ChuckDrinksMilk]

are you recording your guitar with the new microphone you got or directly with a line in? I only ask cause it soudns slightly "digital". Buit anyway, nice song :) Your voice is nice, it reminds me a bit of Owl City. Maybe try recording to a click to keep the tempo tight. Also, try to improve your diction cause sometimes it's harder to hear your lyrics. I loved the harmony. Keeep up the fantastic work though, I write my own songs too so please check mine out. Thank you, and merry christmas :) x

[quikboarder93]

@ChuckDrinksMilk The guitar is direct line in. The vocals are with the new mic. I do record to a metronome, so I'm not sure how it sounds off tempo lol. Also, I get what you mean with the diction. I've been told by quite a few people that some lines are difficult to pick up on. Once they know the lyrics they think it sounds cool/ unique usually though. I'll add the lyrics to the description and it would be awesome to get an opinion from you again after I do that. I'll check out your stuff =]

[quikboarder93]

@ChuckDrinksMilk by the way I love comments like yours. Totally respecting what I'm doing, but being honest about it. That is awesome thank you!

[quikboarder93]

@ChuckDrinksMilk Your guitar parts are very good! I really liked some of it. The only thing I'd recommend is checking out "mix voice" and maybe learning to hit some high notes with your voice. As an artist, I feel like I am able to feel songs more with mix voice and that I have more freedom. Not all songs require it and it's certainly not necessary, but it opens up options, which MAY allow you to be more you... catch my drift?

[4eva59]

i love this!

[TVCMASTER1]

ohhhhhhhh mmyyyy goood lol i love this song