Great timing. I'm not very experienced but i think you kept a natural rhythm going extremely well. Dialogue is so much harder to cut than action! The only thing i missed was a reaction shot after "intimidate me into letting it go?" Perhaps you didn't have it, but i felt that at this first response from him i would expect some shared i-told-you-so moment between her and the "lawyer" . This would also let you add a pause before "excuse me councilor" from Nate.
Great timing. I'm not very experienced but i think you kept a natural rhythm going extremely well. Dialogue is so much harder to cut than action! The only thing i missed was a reaction shot after "intimidate me into letting it go?" Perhaps you didn't have it, but i felt that at this first response from him i would expect some shared i-told-you-so moment between her and the "lawyer" . This would also let you add a pause before "excuse me councilor" from Nate.
vagrant1 8 months ago
Very nice editing sir!! Question: The audio of Nate's line at 1:04, was that from a close-up shot?
slewis 9 months ago