After watching both parts of this, I think it was remarkably well done. The chase scene was probably the best shot- you have a traceur in your midst, which is excellent. I think it was really good.
I'm still cringing at the line, "black-market terrorists" because that implies there is some OTHER kind of terrorist out there. But I'm nitpicking. Given a bit more time and resources, I think this would be an excellently made short film.
Ha! I'm in the credits!
After watching both parts of this, I think it was remarkably well done. The chase scene was probably the best shot- you have a traceur in your midst, which is excellent. I think it was really good.
I'm still cringing at the line, "black-market terrorists" because that implies there is some OTHER kind of terrorist out there. But I'm nitpicking. Given a bit more time and resources, I think this would be an excellently made short film.
mkb07a 2 years ago
lol current time 3:03AM...nice touch!
sergeantchaple 2 years ago
dude 4:40 blood spray! how did you do that?
Ev0n1zer 2 years ago