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Breaking Free (A Jacob/Renesmee Love Story) CH2 (Spring Summer And Forever)

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Uploaded by on Dec 18, 2010

HELLO, SO THIS IS THE FIRST BREAKING FREE EPISODE FROM MY CHANNEL...HOPE U ENJOY IT :D

Renesmee's POV:
Yesterday my family were all worried about the Volturi coming, they still are and the tension is increasing more and more each minute, they said they are coming for me, but I wasn't worried..i did nothing to break the rules..but if they count falling for a werewolf against the rules, then I am condemned to death.. I smiled as Jake's image strolled into my mind, he was my love..if the Volturi said leave him..well I would follow my parents footsteps..lie and hide..
Edward: no you won't run and hide..you will talk to them..
Renesmee: dad..i love you, but stop reading my mind for crying out loud..
Edward: (smiling) why would I do that?
Renesmee: (opened he mouth then closed it)
I can't even win a silly argument against my dad, how can I convince the Volturi?
Edward: (smiling softly) well honey, they won't take much effort, they already think wolves are friends..so don't worry that much..
Renesmee: but what if...
Edward: (interrupting her) if anything goes wrong we'll run and hide (smiling)
Renesmee: (smiling widely)
Edward: (kissing her forehead) Jacob id downstairs waiting for you
Renesmee: (jumping of the bed) he is! Dad I gotta get dressed!!
Edward: I get it..
My hair flew as dad ran out of the room with his supersonic speed, always wished I had that, it would make the time without Jake a lot shorter. Half an hour later I got out of pj's and was walking down the stairs, silence filled the air..i almost began forgetting about the Vultori..
Edward: (going into the living room) we're not silent because of that!
Renesmee: DAD!
Edward : (standing before the stairs) well, your thoughts are very loud..
Renesmee: even if they scream..only use your ability in danger..
Edward: (teasing ) who's the father here?
Renesmee: (looks in his eyes ) you are..
Edward: (smiles) good girl..
A typical dad, sometimes he would be so old fashion, and sometimes he would be cool, until he reads my thoughts..no privacy in this house..i walked into the living room where all the Cullens were sitting, they were watching TV , or at least watching Jacob watch TV..
Kristen: will you two ever stop pickering.. (kisses Edward)
Renesmee: why would we it's fun (grins)
Jacob: (gets up) Hey sweet Nessie
Aww, I love it when he calls me that.. I smiled
Renesmee: hey, so where will we go tonight?
Jacob: it's a surprise..
Renesmee: I love surprises (grins)
Jacob: (kisses her cheek) now if you'll all excuse us, we'll leave..
Kristen: have fun!
Jacob took my hand and lead the way to outside, we got on his bike I clenched my fist on his jacket as he drove so fast across the trees into the woods..
Renesmee: (shouting) u know we did the picnic thing before
Jacob: that is not my surprise
He kept driving for bout 15 minutes until we got to a mountain, he got off the bike and I did the same..
Jacob: now, all we need to do is get on top of that mountain..
Renesmee: mountain climbing ha?
Jacob: ok u need a motive..on top of that mountain is something..well..special
Renesmee : (laughing) u r bad at speeches
Jacob: (smiling) I know , and I am a pack leader ironic ha?
Renesmee: well, let's get going!
It took us only 10 mins to get on that mountain, Jacob carried me half way through, not because I was tired, but he wanted to, and I wanted him to. After we got to the top I saw lights, my eyes took a moment to adjust to the lights, there was tent and a camp fire..
Renesmee: (smiling widely) camping!
Jacob: yeah..not the best but..
Renesmee: (jumping on Jacob and hugging him) it's my favorite thing to do! And we'll spend the night here?
Jacob: yes, and get back tomorrow before...
Renesmee: (looks at him sadly) yeah..
Jacob: it will be ok (putting his hand around her waist)
Renesmee: (resting her head on his shoulder) I hope..
Jacob: wait.. (he runs into the tent for a second and comes back with a music player, puts it on a rock and plays it)
Renesmee: (smiling)
Jacob: (holding her hand) shall I have this dance?
Renesmee: yes you shall..
He put his arms on my waist, I could feel his muscles rubbing against my skin, we were dancing under the moon, above a mountain, where no one can find us..our eyes met, I looked into his deep brown eyes, his soft face, his gorgeous smile, he is Jacob Black, and he is mine forever..nothing will change that not even a volturi..he closed in and so did I, our lips met, we kissed , perfect harmony..we just belong to each other...always will..

THANK YOU FOR READING :D HOPE YOU LIKED IT

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  • that´s sooooo Cute!!!!!

  • @GIRLZROC219 I do one Niley and one Nelena ( I had a poll on the Nelena one between harpielday and another friend, which is why it's Nelena) and i would love to see your feedback on my other stories :D thank you.

  • @14Rawan i don't understand why other people don't read/watch your videos/books! i mean you write niley fan-fics right? well like 65% of nick fans are team niley so i don't see why you don't get more views. i myself are a nelena fan (not that i don't like niley) but ima read your others fics too cuz im kewl like dat XD lol

  • @GIRLZROC219 The story reached a dead end with harpielady, so she asked me to finish it, as it would bring me more subs and views, so I said OK I'll try. She was right for most of it, it did bring me views but only on this series, people still don't read the other stories i write :) But it was fun.

  • @14Rawan awww shucks you make me feel important! lol so i don't mean to sound rude but how did you end up making/finishing 'brecking free' ?

  • @GIRLZROC219 well, to see how harpielady would've finished it,well we'll have to ask her cuz i don't know :D and i think Meyer would "not bad girls" xD but we can't know that either :P what's important is the people who read this and give their feedback, like yourself. :)

  • @14Rawan i mean of course it would change i wasn't playing on it not to :) by the way the book is still good but i just wonder how it would end if harpilady99 finished. also random thought but i also wonder what mrs meyer would think of this book cuz it feels like she wrote this!

  • @GIRLZROC219 The bella-Kristen thing was a little mistake, but the book would of course change with the writer, each one of us see the characters in a different way, yes it's misleading, but we try our best.

  • this is nothing like harpielady99 's book! nessie hates suprises and her mom's anme is bella not kristen (thats the actress who plays her) it's a good book don't get me wrong but miss leading

  • LOVE LOVE LOVE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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