@Carlhockey1 Presentations shouldn't require the audience to constantly pause to read. They'll most likely get annoyed and stop watching. Also, this is advertised as a 5 minute video, but clearly it will take far longer to view, which doesn't work for people with busy schedules. Cussing will get you nowhere. I am offering constructive criticism. I don't really want people telling me how lazy I am, I am simply bringing it to the creators attention.
@Iamisfp well did you know that when there is a solution for a problem you take it and don't complain what the point of making a 20 minute video? just because your a lazy ass?
Confusing wording. Slides could be timed better. not enough time to read one of the early ones.I watched a minute and it seems to be opinions. A lot of them. The first slide, love is NOT an art. I will agree a relationship requires skill to craft, but love is not an art. So you ask questions, that art does not fulfill, and dismiss that opinion, saying "if yes" then theories. I disagree with a lot of what is here. You also use first person a lot, making it worse. constructive criticism only
@Iamisfp hahahha okay XD
Carlhockey1 3 months ago
@Carlhockey1 Stop trollin' so much.
Iamisfp 3 months ago
@Iamisfp stop complaining so much.
Carlhockey1 3 months ago
@Carlhockey1 Presentations shouldn't require the audience to constantly pause to read. They'll most likely get annoyed and stop watching. Also, this is advertised as a 5 minute video, but clearly it will take far longer to view, which doesn't work for people with busy schedules. Cussing will get you nowhere. I am offering constructive criticism. I don't really want people telling me how lazy I am, I am simply bringing it to the creators attention.
Iamisfp 3 months ago
@Iamisfp well did you know that when there is a solution for a problem you take it and don't complain what the point of making a 20 minute video? just because your a lazy ass?
Carlhockey1 3 months ago
@Carlhockey1 Of course. Did you know people usually don't want to stop a video repeatedly, or have to fast forward because some parts move too slow?
Iamisfp 3 months ago
@Iamisfp you know you can pause the video right?
Carlhockey1 3 months ago
Confusing wording. Slides could be timed better. not enough time to read one of the early ones.I watched a minute and it seems to be opinions. A lot of them. The first slide, love is NOT an art. I will agree a relationship requires skill to craft, but love is not an art. So you ask questions, that art does not fulfill, and dismiss that opinion, saying "if yes" then theories. I disagree with a lot of what is here. You also use first person a lot, making it worse. constructive criticism only
Iamisfp 3 months ago
nice work. Lots of time and effort!
workingclasssociety 10 months ago
Thank you for posting this. Worth contemplating at length.
DavidWilliamson1982 10 months ago