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Uploaded by on Apr 30, 2009

JUST SOMETHING I WROTE

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  • wait hold up wait a mineut how you gone talk about condoms on a girl and all that shit when you are a girl yet a lesbian you dont need a condome. just be aware of who pussy you eatin and next this fuckin poetry is ugly as hell its not pose to have that dirty ass ghetto shit in it what the hell is ya problem im not gone sit here and kiss yo ass yo shit is wacccccc. yo mom need to see this bull shit video you made you need an ass whopin for this video. tell yo mom to go get the damn belt

  • @trophie121209 hahaha its good to have one hater. let me guess ur over the age of 25 right? thanks for the criticism though. next time make it constructive. and by the way, there are condoms for lesbians too dumb ass. and learn how to spell check. thanks bye bye.

  • yall need to stop worrying about gender and give feedback on the damn poem

  • thanks look for new piece coming soon

  • puttin up a new one soon guys. thanx 4 da positive feedback.

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  • do u know how deep u r. U need to do sumthing with that talent

  • this is deep. Keep on writing. I really like this

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  • @TEETEE0000001 I think your poem is amazing... Trophie121209 doesn't understand that poetry is art and can't appreciate quality prose:) keep writing and posting

  • REALLY ? I AM NOT GONNA HATE, ALL I GOTTA SAY IS FIND A POWER HIGHER THAN YOURSELF, ME PERSONALLY, I BELIEVE IN JESUS. PEACE LOVE AND ALWAYS ABOUT RESPECT.

  • omg this is amazing

  • AMAZING..

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  • nice

    

  • i kno im late n all bt dat wus de shyd...du me a favv n find me on fb "kientaye johnson" cuz i wnna staii updated

  • Hey hun man i love dat poem. shit was hellah deep! i'm also a poet i just dont have nun up here yet but when i do get sum up check me out. but yo shit go Hard you have a lovely way with words and i was feeling everything you was saying man. keep dat pen in your hand hun!(lyrik)

  • amazing

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