City Starz Contest

my entry for the city starz contest. i have no cam, so I can't make a video. hope you guys enjoy it. let me know what you think.

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This better not just be a soiree of who can use the most cliches
If so is tearing the beat indecently this recently really the way?
No? Sorry to hear it cause that's what I'm gonna do anyway
With exceedingly obscene stanzas leading the purest of minds astray
I've got an idea, I'll just impress them all with my vocabulary
The immaculate conception of my verse's supplanting the faith of a missionary
And so the time's arrived for me to go on a killing spree
I'm flowing like helium-3 assassinating all of the bitter MC's
Screaming like banshees while I'm smashing skulls in with witty bars
Will city stars disqualify me for being better than they are?
That was just a joke now I hope they don't take that facetious line to heart
Understand that I got "passions of the soul" like the works of Rene Descartes
If Asher Roth is sick then we need to step up the game's immunity
Bury him in a place where only the bourgeoisie will be singing his eulogy
The rest of the true players will be busy answering prayers
Making friends with rapping acolytes and then with the rhyming soothsayers

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• City
• Starz
• Contest

[KevinBike]

ur lyrics are sick maan but ur flow needs work just saying bro

[Raiher]

definitely. i've only been writing for a little while and this was my first time recording. but thanks for the comment, all criticism is welcome

[MookieSays1Love]

cool words work on flow youll be dope

[lypse14]

i was feeling the lyrics, but not so much the flow, keep at it though, you're good! good luck and check mine out if you get the chance

peace

[terrascalnicov]

Then again, the man's been rapping for about a month. I think it's a little too early for him to consign himself to ghostwriting.

[thebert23]

u should write for people and probably not rap. it was hurried and just not very easy to listen to. trying to fit too much in with the beat.

on lyrics: definitely real nice. liked the rene descartes reference. dont here that name dropped too often in a hip hop song. keep working.

[terrascalnicov]

doper than a rope-a-dope.

(rope of dope)

[emohkay]

this is ill reminds me of spoken word

[REALYZE4]

yo dopness good luck...