This is basically an experiment. I wrote, composed, and performed all the parts of this song with the exception of the ending which was done by a good friend of mine. Thanks for allowing me to use your lyrical skills and vocals! I'm honestly interested to know what people think. Like or hate it, criticism is welcome, but no name calling please :). The last part is supposed to be slightly off tempo to promote disorder.
Typo: "you future" should be "your future"
I can see the resemblance to to mewithoutyou for the instruments and the overall atmosphere, but I think your other videos are waaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy better :)!
mathistheworst 1 month ago
I really like your “experiment”. I love the intro and the outro. I might suggest some palm muting on the verses with the guitar instead of the open chords…But I guess that is just my style. I love the lyrics and the creativity Good Job!
topher4575 2 months ago 2