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Uploaded by on Nov 17, 2008

My first post-sync sound film for Production 2. 16mm.

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  • lol great video, but they lied to me, they said all blondes were pretty.

  • I completely disagree with the idea of the pacing being off. I think it really helps with establishing the woman as the "docile housewife," which makes it so much better when the reality is unveiled.

    Good work..."girloftheshire"...I would say you are a bigger nerd than I am, but it would probably be untrue...

  • oh i get it

  • I really like the concept, but the pacing is off. The thirty seconds of egg-scrambling is dull. I'm not sure what you were going for artistically, but I think if you spend less time focused on making the breakfast and more on the interaction between the characters, it will make for a more dramatic moment when the wife returns early. This is all very subjective, but I think with your talent you are capable of creating a much deeper dynamic between the characters in the limited time you have.

  • wow u are reallyyyyy good!

  • this was REALLY good

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