Lyric writing contest - the unfinished story

Cantonese lyrics written by 小南in a funny style to the piano song "the unfinished story", which was a piano instrumental piece composed by myself originally. To learn more about the song, please visit:
http://www.pianomusicdownload.blogspot.com

小南版: 看夜星 (廣東話)
*夜靜 星星生輝襯托月亮晶望向 深宵太空人入勝郊野一刻寂靜 漆黑山徑 驟覺 隻腳疼痛被誰叮夜幕東風輕吹愛意在上升悅耳高歌愛曲來做證愛在愛在愛在馳騁 共你 多麼高興這一晚繼續讓愛心內併 Repeat * 我與她 山海證神亦說愛已盟定誰都知道高燒一症 炎熱到足以熔冰愛這歌心傾聽雲漸散快樂還剩來多一晚溫馨高興 來共你觀看流星 能做到愛中專一真正在這生相愛極純淨愛歌 這一唱新穎 她一笑觸碰生命這一愛得到萬眾星力證 未懼身邊蚊滋再繼續在叮讓那蟋蟀奏曲來助慶愛是愛是愛是神聖 像那 星星般靚 (靚: 讀作"閃閃靚"的"靚"音)這一世愛著未怕得絕症
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Category:

Music

Tags:

• lyrics
• writing
• contest
• piano
• new
• age
• soothing
• funny
• unfinished
• story
• starry
• night

[xianning]

i find myself listening to this like everyday...this song is beautiful!!!

[xianning]

wow with the lyrics this sounds amazing :D!!! i love this song very nice chinese lyrics too :)

[OnlyImagine12]

Pretty! I was able to understand half of the words, since I speak madarin. Hehe =]

[ytachm]

Con't....2

Though the mosquito keeps on biting, I am fearless

The crickets keep on singing to celebrate our love

Love is holly, like the shining stars

In love with him (her), incurable diseases are nothing

[ytachm]

Con't...

We are in deep love, the mountains and the seas can prove this

Even God endorse this

We are in "fever love", and the heat can melt the ice

We listen to the love song by hearts

The clouds change but our happiness remains

How romantic and happy to see the stars with you, I wish to have one more night like this

Our love is pure as we love only each other in this life

I sing this love song in a new way, and this touches his (her) life

Our love is witnessed by millions of stars in the sky

[ytachm]

Let me try to translate my lyrics in English:

Title:Starry Night

*The moon is shining at a starry night

We are so attracted to this

The country side is serene, the foot path is dark this moment, I feel a painful bite on my leg, what's it?

We feel our love deepens while enjoying the caress of the breeze from the east

I sing a love song, this is one proof

I feel very happy under this deep love

Let it continue at this night

Repeat *

[ytachm]

Yes,I also agree! Her voice is sweet,relaxing and comfortable feeling when listening to it.

[FourStar120]

I agree with "ytachm"...Amy's voice has become another musical instrument which adds another dimension to her piano composition and playing in this piece!! Now...my search begins for an interperter. :-) My many thanks to both Amy and ytachm for creating both the music and the lyrics. I'll be relaxing to this song many times over.

[ytachm]

Oh,what a nice voice you have! You sing so well,together with the wonderful music, I like this song very much!

Thanks for your soul-touching music to inspire me to write the lyrics!

小南