Thy Neighbor

A girl's tranquil evening is interrupted by her neighbor.

Featuring voiceover by Dulci, and a clip from Strange Company's feature-length machinima film, BloodSpell.

Also featuring Music Packs by Bob and Barn
Available now from Moviestorm
www.moviestorm.net

Special Thanks to AngriBuddhist, Bongoman, and DavidWWW for the Moviestorm mods that helped complete this film.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• moviestorm
• bobandbarn
• animation
• short
• film
• horror
• bloodspell

[tndStudios]

This isn't a favorite among the work I've seen here (but then again, the flavor varies from person to person), but I do have some objective commentary about it.

The lighting was near perfect. The attention given to this is obvious throughout.

The suspense factor was excellent, some camera movement was a bit excessive though and I felt it took away from the mood.

The "jolt" part of the video needed some "oomph" to it. Maybe doing it right after a camera cut would increase the surprise factor?

[zsOverman]

Great tip on the jolt, tnd, I'll experiment with that. I'm really hungry for camera operator feedback right now, trying to learn as much about it as possible (and then get a virtual camera to do that somehow), so thank you very much!

[KrrishSpyker]

@ Capemedia

I was kind of wondering same LOL

[capemedia]

Well give us a link to your work so we can compare. As there is nothing on your channel?

Simple!

[GregoryJecht]

Splendid :D

[sweetheart853]

what game is this?

[SimsVideoWatcher1]

cool! what did you do this with?

[kewlnews]

Awesome!

[2FatGuyz]

Your creations are always such a joy to behold. Though the ones I've seen are usually dark, even if comedic as well, it always leaves me feeling effervescent. Thank you, keep them coming!

[GotAProblemWithThat]

that was awesome!what program is this by the way?

[TheLivingDeadOne]

DAMN YOU! for making my watch and it just a damn dead guy.

Great video

[tracechops]

**Troll alert, troll alert, ding ding we have a winner**

I too would love to see some of your professionally edited work, please link us up. What is it you do Gave, edit wedding videos in some back street shop.

[abukhatar]

spoken like a true elitist - the real test of the work is judged by how much it pleases the audience and last count most of us are pleased. Perhaps, you anus is blocking your view?

[zsOverman]

I've learned a ton from the feedback I get on my videos, I have a lot more to learn and will continue to do so.

Gavril, I have no idea what kind of world you live in, where a few days absence from YouTube means low intelligence, where throwing around your ambiguous credentials - f'ing TWICE - increases credibility. "No offense, " but I think you're a bitter self-important douchebag, that's the credential evident from your comments. Go play with your IMDB entry or something. "No offense."