My immortal part 1

Join me as we try and read what is classed as the worst fan fic ever written!

For those who wish to read along: http://myimmortalrehost.webs.com/chapters122.htm



I can't believe i'm doing this. Thank you Kit for the help, as I would never read this without help ..

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[LillSenorita]

I love the part when she screms: No one fucking understands me!1"

I don't find that strange.

[olliedag]

Hehe, glad you liked it, you know I really need to finish up the last 4-5 parts,  might do that in the next few days.

[tony11500]

ummmm WTF?!?!

hogwarts gothic vampire hmmm, when was this written? sounds like a rip off of harry potter and twilight written by a retard. there are better stories by 5 year olds.

i wont comment on this again, just stating my opinion and i will try to watch the rest

[olliedag]

If you think this is bad ... just go watch the others .. *shudders*

Oh, and if you're still alive after doing so, I will possibly be uploading more later, so yey for brain tumors made b evil fanfics!

[johnofordo3]

I just read ahead a few chapters, dear god it awful. Where the hell did she manage to find good reviews??

Nice work bringing this to light, have fun with half a melted brain! ^^

[olliedag]

Yeah, it is pretty bad, and it only goes downhill from here =D

[Rekabeck352]

Wow this is so hilariously terribly X'D

Don't you just hate those goddamn flamers? Sheesh.

[SashaSilverMoon]

x3 I love this You are awesome for reading this.

[WrathXD1]

one day i plan on writeing something so much worse then this i think it shall go like....it all started the day i died....though maby i didnt really die i-i-i was in love with the worst most terrable and vile person in the world....draco malfoy ( so his is it ;DDD is it stinnging yet)

[WrathXD1]

i feel my brain slowly dieing

[CherryBlossom6057]

Oh. My. God. I have NEVER laughed so fucking much in my life!!! XDD This is beyond terrible!!! That bitch deserves the death penalty for writing this!!! XDDDDD

[Suzumushi100]

wait she doesn't own the lyric or the band but she apparently owns harry potter?

[kumukumunukunukuakua]

oh my god.

u guys just made my day with this reading.

its so friggin hilarious!

love it. ;D

[WrathXD1]

WHAT DID SHE DO 2 DRACO AND WHAT DID SHE DO TO HARRY POTTER >.< WTF MY BRAIN IT HURTS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TT_TT my poor brian

[WrathXD1]

I LOVE YOU PPL and can i just say that SHE ISNT GOTH

[AmeKuruma]

O_O; It was not a good idea to watch/read this right before doing my calculus homework.

[terripoe]

Oh God it's already melting my brain! LOL!

[airexanimegirl]

You chaps are funny XDD