Sevilou "Blood-red oath" (original)

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This is one of beats made by me in Fruity Loops lately.
I really appericiate your honest and constructive criticism and ratings,
Please rate and comment what do you think of it,
so in my next beats I can improove my skills.
I disclaim the rights for image used in the clip.

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Entertainment

Tags:

• Sevilou
• Bloodred
• oath
• original
• composition

[Hontaish]

First off - I loved this.

I think that the background melody could've been a little louder though at the second 'part' if you know what I mean. And a few other later places it's used in.

I'm poor at articulating though, sorry if I'm no help DX

[Sevilou]

@Hontaish Thank You very much for your constructive critism my mate, I definetely was lazy on mastering in this beat. Yes i know what you mean, basicly when I was composing this song i couldn't have the speakers up loud because of certain things, I've turned the volume of beat too loud and the instruments were like beating each other, wich in result made a mess, You helped me a lot friend, comments like Yours lift me up on spirit and give me more faith in myself so I learn my mistakes. Again thx

[stockerman77]

Nice one, how long you been playin around with fruity? Check mine out also if you wouldn mind, got low views aswell and wouldn mind some honest criticism.

Yours flow nicely, nice breaks , good mastering too,

[Sevilou]

@stockerman77 i've been working on fruity loops since few years altho i had a very long break like 2 years , i've started to make new beats since like 4 months, sure i will check your beats, thank you for your comment and rating!

[hannah60000]

Nice beat not really apro in FL and beat making but sounds like a up beat club kinda mix to me by the way what anime or manga is the picin the vid from?? I guess school rumble?? :D

[Sevilou]

@hannah60000 the pic is from Umineko no naku Koro ni, in the picture are Ushiromiya Batler and Ushiromiya Ange, siblings :)

[BlackRockShooter]

Amazing beat!*o* Aww~ You really rock it >_<!

[hannah60000]

@Sevilou Oh... lol Thanks =D

[Sevilou]

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