Since Joe Lieberman has already stooped to negative campaign ads, I decided to take his example and run with it. Joe's Votes, set to his boastful convention song, "Hit Me With Your Best Shot". Fire away...
CRITIQUE: (1) "Actual" Democrat, not "Real", (2) More soldier photos! Fill the screen. (3) Superimpose text on the BORING crowd shots. (4) Break up long sentences. RANT: I'm SICK of Democrats playing passive aggressive. "It's ok, don't worry about me, you just go run your little government there, I'll just stay out of your way" (yes I went there!) not lifting a finger unless asked by the GOP, just so they can blame everything on them when it all goes to hell. Anyway, good job!
CRITIQUE: (1) "Actual" Democrat, not "Real", (2) More soldier photos! Fill the screen. (3) Superimpose text on the BORING crowd shots. (4) Break up long sentences. RANT: I'm SICK of Democrats playing passive aggressive. "It's ok, don't worry about me, you just go run your little government there, I'll just stay out of your way" (yes I went there!) not lifting a finger unless asked by the GOP, just so they can blame everything on them when it all goes to hell. Anyway, good job!
jordinyc 5 years ago