Tails, You're Dead (Short Film - 2011)

My first short film made in University. Made for a scriptwriting project.

Starring Ben Halliwell
Written and Directed by George Bass
Produced by Gemma Benefer
Director of Photography/ Editor - Tom Anderson
Sound Recordist - Luke Benfield
Sound Mixer - Andre Philips
Production assistant - Jessica Bannister

Shot on the panasonic 71E

Category:

Film & Animation

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• Short Film
• Drama
• panasonic
• 71
• red
• epic
• scarlet
• supertom123
• tom
• anderson
• university
• of
• lincoln
• tomska

[chrisweeks101]

Steady Cam FTW

[supertom123]

@chrisweeks101 YEAHH! Except we didn't use a steadicam.. :/ (track)

[gambitmagic201]

an idea on script writing.... People dont really write the way they talk, so wat makes it a little easier would be to set up an audio recorder, and improve the lines. That helps make the lines a little more organic and real.

[supertom123]

@gambitmagic201 Always love some in depth feedback, thanks man. :)

[Dreken83]

@TomCrooze1102 I did some soundediting/mixing on the audio. And I must say the recorded audio wasn't 100% perfect. But I tried to make the best of it.

[missfangsmerlin]

Wow! That was really good! it felt like I was reading a book, well written and pieced together! Great!

[FixelPixel]

Awsome Short Film im starting my channel the weekend after new years im going to do a cheesy short film and the do a spook please check it out in a few weeks

[TomCrooze1102]

Also, you can also play with mystery and suspense without revealing so much about the character, which could have worked in this case. And you gotta be more careful and detailed, too. For instance, to me, it was quite distracting to see people walking in the background, even a dog, while the character was in such emotional state. Anyway, other than that and a few other minor things, I think you're gonna be pretty good soon. Good luck.

[TomCrooze1102]

This short-film is a good start, definitely. You got some nice shots and locations. The audio is pretty good, too. The only week things are the script and the acting. The second, I believe, is just product of poor writing; people don't talk like that and even some crazy dude wouldn't be so explicit and clear about everything. I think even crazy people have certain patterns, and actions always speak louder than words (cliché but it's true).

[CockWomble]

Hell yeah! (George's Brother).

[MrBlomu]

Great work!