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A NELENA STORY {ep.7} RATED R!

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Uploaded by on Feb 8, 2010

WHERE WE LEFT OFF:
Do: *walks in* Oh my.. This is bad! We need to get him in the examination room, quick!
S: *crying hard*
Nu: *helping the doctor get Nick up on a stretcher*
Do: Okay let's go. *they take Nick to the exam room with Selena stumbling along beside them*
SELENA'S POV:
Oh my gosh. I can't believe this. As soon as I'm about to get him in my arms again, this happens. Of course, this would only happen to me. Gosh I'm cryiing so hard I can't even breathe or see. Maybe I'll stumble and break my head open too.
END POV-
Do: *puts Nick up on a bed and hooks wires up to him*
S: *walks into the room slowly and sits in a chair sobbing*
Nu: *comforting Selena* It'll be okay, hun. Don't worry.
S: *shakes her head*
Do: *examines Nick*
Nu: See anything, Doc?
Do: Oh my..
S: WHAT? WHAT IS IT?!
Do: He's cracked open a huge section of his skull. This could turn out bad. It's too bad he blanked out before we could do anything about it. He might go into a coma..
S: *burst out in tears* NO! He can't! He won't.. *rushes to Nick* Baby, can you hear me. Please..please.. wake up. I love you so much. Please! *sobbing*
Nu: Sweetie I think you should go. Get some rest..
Do: Yeah that's probably the best thing to do right now. Go home sweetie.
S: I can't.. What if he wakes up. I have to tell him I love him..Pleasee.. plea-
Do: We'll call you.
S: *wants to refuse but leaves*
TWO WEEKS LATER:
S: *visits the hospital once again as her daily routine*
Receptionist: Hello sweetie. He's in Room 124 for today.
S: Thanks. *smiles and goes to Room 124*
Do: *checking on Nick*
S: Hey Doc, any news?
Do: Sorry, Selena. He still hasn't woke up yet. I don't see any signs of recovery for any time soon. Sorry, hun. *leaves*
S: *holding back tears; walks up to Nick and holds his hands in hers* Nicky baby. Wake upp..come on. Please baby..i miss you. *squeezes his hands; sobs loudly* Please Nick! Pleasee....pleasee... *tears are coming down faster*
Do: *walks in* Sorry Selena. Visiting hours are temporarily over. Come back in three hours..If your up to it.
S: Oh.. um yeah. Sorry. *leaves quickly*
THREE MONTHS LATER:
Still, no sign of Nick whatsoever. Selena hasn't visited him for over a month. The doctor is trying hard to figure out what will happen with Nick. But for now, wait for episode 8. Love you guys, Brianna. (:

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  • sorry, this series is kinda stupid... and pointless... im sorry

    im just critiquing tho.

    mine may be the most retarded series but I don't see a point...

    also, you obviously don't know anything about comas or injutries becuase these are all unrealistic.

  • @TaylorsGalEllie k whatever. stop hating. if you dont like it, you dont have to comment. & no i dont know anything about comas. no one ever said i couldn't make up my own story the way i wanted.

  • @DiSNEYL0VEST0RY okay, sorry, I was just critiquing

    jeez!

  • @TaylorsGalEllie just sayin.

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  • @DiSNEYL0VEST0RY that wasn't critqing that was just being bored and commenting if you were you find find something nice about it and something to work on thats like me going on your channel and saying your page looks like shit you obviously dont know what your doing and sayng im just critiqing. Its just something to read and write for fun its not supposed to be a novel

  • are you gonna make the next one anytime soon? i loved it so far.

  • Love it! youre episodes are awesome!

  • WHOA!!!! This was posted on my B-Day...Felt the need to say that :0..LOVE IT!!

  • post more and longer!!!

  • POST MORE NOW

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