Short Film - 10 Doors Closing (High Quality)

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Uploaded by on Feb 2, 2009

* Please Watch in High Quality * A re-upload. Better format and resolution...
A poetry driven story set on the London Underground. The poem is one I wrote a couple of years ago. It's been shown at Raindance East, Supershorts,and some other festivals Please feel free to leave a comment... Thanks. Oh and heres the words..


How sweet, Loves first kisses
The lingering caresses of two hearts..
Unwilling to break the spell of ages...
You came to me,
Bourne on the breath of hope..
And I was safe in your love..

As we part now...
You descend in to the underworld..
A place where time obeys a different master
And only the fleet of foot stay quick

Unnatural fires burn a prickly light
And the war drums pound
As you, my Hero
Dodging devils and wraiths..
Journey down in to the belly of the earth

Deeper.. and deeper, past Siren song
Destiny draws you
To the place..
Where hissing steely serpents
Feast on the hopes of men...

The gleaming labyrinth beckons..
A palace of memories,
And jagged dreams...
..of what could have beens..
Glistening, with the salty fruit of pain
And regret..

I feel you..
In my blood..And in my bones
Your heart beats out the rhythm of my joy
An intricate and intoxicating dance..
I know you...

The end is near, my love... fear not..
For even in that darkest hour,
At the end of the world
When all is lost...
.....
I am here....

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  • This is really cool!

    What I want to know is how you got the station empty like that.

    You were the only one there, lol

  • @lovelierlex I applied to the film unit of London Underground. They gave us permission to film for free. Actually filmed in Leicester Square and some shots at Waterloo too..We started at about 10.30 pm and when the station was open and shot through the night till 8 or 9 in the morning..

  • Fantastic film, Dylan. The poem was beautiful, and I can only agree with ifyoudare... that it works really well with the action. Definitely a favourite.

  • great pwbc.. Thankyou.. :-)

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  • This is absolutely fab - did you get my private message regarding it? Love the way the language works with the action.

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  • quality that dyl. nicely put together, and a poem par excellence.

    next time though, maybe a bit less snogging and you might not have to walk home.

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