Snowfeet's poem collective (Line 2) by St. P

Here is a 3rd line/segment of the collective poem written and read by my friend. St. P. If you wish to write a 4th line from this point, read the poem in its entirety and then read your addition. Post the video as a response to this one. Jump in on any of the currently running threads, as many times as you like. When you think youve written what feels like the end of a poem, say The End or in someway otherwise indicate you think its the end. I will be compiling some of the poetry branches into single, unified poems/videos and posting them on YT at the end of December. The poems that are finished by Dec. 13th or thereabouts will be viewable at the exhibition for my Media and Materials class in Chicago. Thanks in advance for all of your contributions.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• art
• therapy
• poem
• beautiful
• boy

[angelwhite]

I love how you can hear the clock ticking in the background.

[snowfeet]

You know what's even better? That clock ticking is a giant replica of a gold wrist watch. It doesn't even tell correct time, it just comes to life and ticks every now and then. Yes, it was quite nice that it was ticking at the time this video was recorded.

[harleynanda]

Pleasant lines; a nice usage of imagery and meter lending this poem a lilting continuity. Nice addition and new thread.

[simpdon]

I watched this just after waking up in the morning. How nice. Thank you.