Marriage advice for Kenny and the Captains from Gregory Corso (part 1)

Be careful not to get swept away by the current, dragged under by a torrent of words in a whirlpool, soaked to the skin by a cascade of alliteration and onomatopoeia, and if you do get into deep water, do it naked since clothes are always a hindrance in the steam of consciousness.

Too true.

Well I thought that it could have been improved considerably if I could have had a bongo playing astrophysisist  like Richard Feynman for some percussive effects.

Being astute you will no doubt have noticed that the poem makes mention Tannu-Tuvan postage stamps... Feynman even though only an infinitesimal part of the general population could understand his mathematical physics captured the world attention by playing the bongos and inventing the atom bomb.

Tuvan throat music was also missing