:RE Let's Write a Sawng (Step 8. Development)

This is verse/chorus, then a bridge idea that builds up to a spot for a solo. It's a kind of sloppy recording, but it's just to get the general idea across, I'm still working on the solo for it too

PS- I posted the response here because commenting is disabled on rivers video, and I think you have the coolest version so far

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• Let's
• Write
• Sawng
• Development

[kimballwhiting]

i think this is the best version I've heard - the second segment actually fits with the main part. Plus, it seems like you could transition to and from the main part and the contrast between the syncopation/non-syncopation would feed into the whole momentum thing rivers was talking aboutwould. I hope rivers knows of this version's existence (34 views)

[squidgerino]

thanks, I didn't sumbit it in time for the deadline... I just posted a new video with an idea for a chorus in D though.

[squidgerino]

By the way I posted the video here because commenting was disabled on rivers video, and I think you have the coolest version so far