keep working on matching the rhythm of the wordfalls with not just the sonic centers of his speach, but the understood centers--that is, match the wordfall with when the word actually registers in the mind of the listener. It's very very close, but I think it could be closer. speaking of "closer," I think NeYo's producer did a great job with it in the music video entitled "closer" check it out.
great stuff.
keep working on matching the rhythm of the wordfalls with not just the sonic centers of his speach, but the understood centers--that is, match the wordfall with when the word actually registers in the mind of the listener. It's very very close, but I think it could be closer. speaking of "closer," I think NeYo's producer did a great job with it in the music video entitled "closer" check it out.
itsdawomb 2 years ago
Well done, good sir.
Well done indeed. I would love to see your take on the inaugural address.
TheCrookedGremlins 3 years ago
Cynicism. Very good, but the spelling throws it at a crucial point.
Senzuru 3 years ago
So good, I favorited it. 5 stars,
3c
compton3c 3 years ago
yes you can
danic3 3 years ago
Very Nice.
FHSTVAshes 3 years ago