I seen a girl walk by
she made me look twice
then i looked twice more
it was a switch in her step
that had me loosing my breath
when I went to say hello
I only spat out air
and by the time I recovered
she was no longer there
seconds later I got to kickin myself
minutes later Im thinkin I need some help
so I call my homeboy up and I tell him the news
and he say yea I feel ya
thats coo thats coo
he suggest we go out lata
to show me some moves
and I say ight homeboy
what you think bout two
so we meet up at a park
he got his game face on
he tells me first i need some confidence
try on this cologne
so I put it on and suddnly
Im feelin little better
then playboy notices shorty
walkin with no sweater
so I walk up to the girl
and I ask her how she is
she says fine
but she shivering cuz of how chilly it is
so I offer up my sweater
I know she need to warm up
but she denies cuz she dont know me
and she got her guard up
so I say hey thats fine
you go ahead and stay cold
but at least let me walk you to where ever you go
she looks at me and I smile
and she accepts my request
so I walk her to her mommas house
and we make breakfast
only it was the afternoon
so it was unorthodoxed at first
well, thats what she said
and I told her
how shit works
-she smiled-
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Verse two here we go man
this ones a doozy
the girl from verse one
is now a floozy
You wouldnt belive it if I told ya
how she do me
so I wont instead ill tell ya
how she screwed me
Its like shampoo commercials
the way them women illude me
or like a crack rock to a dope fiend
whos broke named lucy
she took me fo all my money
cars and jewlery
whats worse is she stole my heart
damn that girl was a cutie
Im with eminem when he askin
how she could do me
after the good time we had
all she did was use me?
make a nigga wanna quit
like Nelly on the music
Id hold my head up but
Im not seeing the amusment
I gotta think oif somethin else
so I can keep from loosin
I need to find my own peace of mind
this is abusing
if i could just make it to the chorus
maybe ill make it
gotta survive to the end cuz
there aint no wastin
-instrumentals-
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So I wake up its the
day after the day after first
with my feelins still hurt
Brush my teeth come my hair
then I see her purse
so I go through it and find out
her name's Mariah Smirtz
she works at the grocery store
down on 31st
so I grab my fixie and get to ridin on to school
I figure Ill hit it up after I think it through
so I thought it through
of what I ought to do
and what I ought to do is catch her walkin after work
that way I can get her and ask her why she hurts
so I wait for her and see her leavin her work -job-?
its been like 6 hours and I'm frustrated at first
but I cool down as I walk over to her
and she sees me comin so she starts to slur
all her words with the man shes with
hes a co worker and looks like a snich
anyway I step up and the conversation starts like this
how you do me like that you bitch
she claim she aint never seen me in her life
so I start to get alittle crazy like yea thats right
and I suppose we didnt make breakfast at yo mommas house
and she act like she dont know what it is I'm talkin bout
so I thought it out and I think things through damn Im a fool
this was just another daydream while i was sittin in school
ooohhh
u garbage.. talib would slap the sht out u... u sound nervous n sht man... tighten ya delivery ya voice sound lik smthn iight wrth a listen u dnt hve a shitty, n u tighten the fuck out ya lyrics family hope ths was lke a frst time or smthn cs if ths is smthn u wrkd on... im sorry but u need more thn work
chickenwang4 3 years ago
Thanks for the comment!
Stay in school though, hopefully your writing will improve.
H4x04 3 years ago
dude you blow..hahaha give up you fuckin homo
stuntmain 3 years ago
hahah sick my first negative comment :P thanks
H4x04 3 years ago
aha thanks everybody
Ill keep em goin.
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H4x04 3 years ago