Mr. Right (Original)

I wrote this one last summer but I've avoided posting it because it's a little bland. It's supposed to be all jazzy but I have no skill in that area SO if anyone can think of a way to spice it up PLEASE feel free to message me or post a response or something!
Seriously guys ... this song needs some major help :(

Chords:
Am E G D
F E

Lyrics:

Mr. Hazy, I don't want you
Mr. Maybe, honey you just won't do

The perfect man, there are so few
I've been waiting so long, for one to come through
So tell me Mr. Right, where are you?

I've seen so many types, but I had to pass them by
They can't handle me, I can see it in their eyes

When will I find that one who's bonafide?
Someone who's truly genuine
Mr. Right, you're making me cry

[Insert Solo Here]

Baby I've been patient, for so long
On my own, I'm only so strong
Mr. Right, quit doing me wrong

Category:

Music

Tags:

• mr
• right
• original
• singing
• playing
• acoustic
• guitar

[LullabySushi]

What's the strumming pattern?

[coffielover35]

i like it

[BrandoneSandoval]

I think you need a band.. lol

you got good material, modernize music with your talent. throw in some more flavor, you need a bassist.

[ChadA23]

I could do a solo lol. Not sure if you would like it or not though lol. And idk how long it would take me to get it up

[CuteSmiles159]

I think your voice is perfect for this song but next time wat would be better is if we got to see your beautiful face.

[Kaela9146]

I really like this song, It's catchy, and original! Thank you.

[weetam19]

i got my electric guitar out and played along with that song i came up with sum pritty cool stuff nice song by the way that played with a piano would be amazin it would hit the soul

[tasgeary]

wow hehe galing ah.. ahm nice song ahm filipinos are talented too

[pipeline54]

cool song and vibe, but the guitar chords don't match your voice at some points. I would keep your voice the same and change the guitar tab a little.

[iheartlana]

definitely diggin the vibe on this. keep doin ur thing.