Stand in the Rain (Ch.11) M 9/10

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Right now I'm on a writer's roll! I'm taking advantage of this and have written three chapters for NB and one for SITR (Stand in the rain) in three hours!! comments would be appreciated!!

Chapter 11
Natalie- and now Im here. I just needed some time away from everyone.
Kristen- wow. That must be horrible to live through.
Natalie- it was. But Im trying to think positive about it. [[A/N: The whole time Natalie was telling her story Kristen was looking through the pictures on Natalies camera]]
Kristen- is this you and Joe?

I took the camera from her and saw a picture of Joe and me kissing here in California. I had forgotten Jen had taken this picture.
Natalie-yeah

There was a knock on the door and Jennie walked in with a pizza box and sodas.
Jennie- Dinner!
Natalie- Tio Joses not gonna eat with us, huh? (Jennie sat on the bed)
Kristen- Wed be eating salad if he was.
Natalie- Hes still on that health kick?
Jennie- yeah. Gosh I havent eaten junk food in ages (Pause) so, what you guys been up to in here?
Kristin- oh nothing. Just helping Natalie unpack.
Jennie- so have you prepared her for West Bev. yet?
Kristin- Shes going to West Bev.? Oh My Gosh thats awesome! I wont be alone!
Natalie- Alone?
Kristin- Everyone is so snotty at that school so I choose not to associate with them. So Im considered a loner. But now Ill have you to talk to.
Natalie- Well Im glad then

Later that Night
Jennie had left and Kristen and I were still talking in my room
Kristen- Serious question
Natalie- shoot
Kristen- How far along are you?
Natalie- almost four months
Kristin- are you scared?
Natalie- a little

There was a knock on the door and my Tio Jose came in.
TJ- What are you two still doing up? Its nearly 11:30 and you have school tomorrow.
Kristin- sorry Jose
Natalie- we mustve lost track of time. sorry
TJ- alright. well enough coffee talk with Natalie and Kristen. Time for bed [[A/N: My gym teacher says this about me and my friend. Quit the coffee talk with Becky and Melissa and start warming up!]]
Kristin-(gets up) alright good night Natalie
Natalie- good night

They left and I changed into my flannel PJ bottoms, a white tee and Nicks black hoodie. I climbed into my bed, shut off the lamp and turned to face the window. I watched and wondered if everyone back home was looking up at the same bright moon. I felt my heart aching and tears coming to my eyes. I turned and laid on my back. I would not let myself cry myself to sleep. I was turning over a new leaf. It was a clean slate.
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Blow the candles out
Looks like a solo tonight
Im beginning to see the light
Blow the candles out
Looks like a solo tonight
But I think Ill be alright
Song: Candles-Hey Monday

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  • awesome :]

    i feel bad for natalie shes like alone

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