CHERUB DREAMS

cherub dreams-
i cant remember the motivation of articulation in those small hands cherubs lands in a sea of what was once me i believe we are free to float and quote and assimilate in the smoke smokey haze float into an alternative daze days of thought limited limitelessley contradicting in our infinity our affinities soft spoken obscenities we progress and transgress into a grey haired maze a laze of days we wait for reminiscent haze on green jaundous folly catch the trolley white sparks electric zigzags cigarette smoke spoke in adult waves reminding us of a faint spark of prepubescent gaze the waves move forward akwardly ticking the serene scene clean and we are lean and mean older and younger farther out yonder how strange it seems to me for your cherub dreams are so clean im talking in dream stem from rem of eyebrow sweat gleam i saw me there once in a dream.

a song i wrote after looking at my 5 year old brothers hand when he was sleeping i thought i cant remember what he thinks so i wrote a folk song of reminiscent thought with a backround of grunge portraying adult thoughts making you almost incapable of childlike ones(folk). and i wrote the lyrics when i was half asleep.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• cherub
• dreams
• folk
• grunge
• our
• house

[robs70986987]

how was this recorded?

[ndargatis]

on a very crude editing system i had to record everything separate. listen to the other version its got a cello backround on the keyboard.

[ndargatis]

windows movie maker you convert the file to wmv you hit publish to convert it and then you can upload it.

[poemsbytom]

JEFF!!!!!! This has serious potential. The guitar melody kicks ass. The banging and clanging kills it though. Sounds like your play and singing at a logging company or someting. My recommendation is to collaborate with someone on this and take it to the next level. The lyrics and melody and flow are worthy. I realized long ago that my talent for writing was great but I'd never be on stage Your problem is that, as is, you'll only reach 2 percent of the people...

[ndargatis]

yeah i was thinking about changing that or redoing it i would really love feedback as a backround noise though not as loud.thanx for listening im probably going to post one without it also.

[jelasings]

jeff....hey new kind of video :)...and a cool grunge song..what a beautiful title...and liked a lot to read the more information...*****

[ndargatis]

thanx.

[stonerman000]

yeahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!

[ndargatis]

thanx glad you liked it.

[tayloreh]

"soft spoken obscenities we progress and transgress into a grey haired maze a laze of days we wait for reminiscent haze on green jaundous folly catch the trolley white sparks electric zigzags cigarette smoke spoke in adult waves reminding us of a faint spark of prepubescent gaze the waves move forward akwardly ticking the serene scene clean and we are lean and mean older"

just went to a restaurant with some friends and some thoughts like these were there. With age, I worry we all become posers.