Ocean (Poem)

I wrote this poem to express that no matter what life throws at you and no matter how bad things look you can always pull thorugh. The poem is more geared towards a Relationship with someone that is supposed to last a lifetime.

In the comments below tell me if this poem captures that or even tell me how it makes YOU personally feel...

All rude and crude comments will be ignored

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Ocean
• love
• forever
• poetry
• poem
• boat
• passion
• life
• together
• bring
• me
• to
• instrumental
• inspirational
• never
• give
• up
• word
• going
• cruise
• evanescence
• turner
• travel
• log
• high
• speed
• credits
• trailer
• defense
• again
• immortal
• words
• adventure
• spoken

[Quaithen777]

I like the message that you tried to incorporate into the poem. i also liked the music choice.

[Skwisgaar1991]

@Quaithen777 Thank you I apperciate the feedback now when you say tried what kind of message did the poem send to you? I'm curious becasue I know that different things send different messages to different people LoL

[TheFallenAngelist]

Love the poem, love the poetry and love to write the poetry as well, except it's in the category of dark poetry :) If you want to make your poems more public, join the site Deep Underground Poetry. Trust me, I'm a member for about 200 days, and you get a lot of comments and feedback's. :)

[chocolaterain345]

wow that was amazing!

[NightIsDeath1]

@Lako4ever Me too! I almost went back, but curiosity got the better of me. LOl, it was good tho, wasent it?

[mewmewrainbow100]

I love it it's amazing

[DarkGothGirl3212]

Nice Poem :D

[Lako4ever]

i came here frum the sailor song link O.o

[Quaithen777]

@Skwisgaar1991 i was thinking in my head that it was saying that although troubles may harm us, nothings will keep us apart