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We'll See (a justin bieber love story) pt. 54

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heyy! sorry ive been taking long breaks in between postings. i have a lot going on school wise and crap haha. well heres 54!

"um.. justin?" i whisper.
"dont move yet." he orders quietly.
"what? what are you talk-"
"shh." he quiets me softly.
theres a snapping noise at the same time that justin shoves me so hard i fall to the ground 10 feet away. theres a deafeningly loud crashing sound only seconds later. my head snaps up in a flash to see a giant black blob that has sunken int the ground. justin shines his flashlight on it.
i gasp. justin just stares.
first the rope trap, which was actually nothing compared to this, and now a huge silver axe head, sharp enough to cut through flesh and bone like butter, and heavy enough to destroy a tiled floor from a 9 feet drop.
"now do you understand that when i say we need to be careful and that we could die im really, really serious?" he asks, still staring at the axe head.
"never said i doubted you before. though this has just backed you up on that statement immensely."
"uhuh. sorry i had to get so rough with you just then. i had to get you far away at just the right time, really fast. i knew something like that was coming. did i hurt you?" he bends down, inspecting me for injuries.
"no, im fine. and that doesnt matter. thanks for saving my life for the... fifth time so far."
he laughs. "no problem. i mean that, bre. id save your life any day, no matter what the consequences."
we're vulnerable right now. i know we should keep moving but... his eyes.. i cant look away. they seem to melt me from the inside out, mesmerize me. snap out of it! i order myself. distractions...
"so.. how do you think this tank thing was triggered?" i ask to change the subject, but still interested in what he had to say. he walks over to the step cautiously, as though scared to set off something else, which is a completely plausible precaution if you ask me.
"my guess is that there was some hidden motion detector, since i cant see any evidence of any visible thing that could have set it off. when the motion detector was activated, the rope was slowly loosened, causing it to snap and releasing the axe/tank."
"hmm.. interesting hypothesis. but we should probably keep moving now."
he nods, shining his flashlight and staring ominously down the dimly lit hallway that lay before us. i go over to him and side-hug him around the waist. "we can get through this." i whisper. he turns his head so he can kiss me.
"thats what im praying for." he answers. we start moving forward, but i keep one arm securely around his waist, and his securely around mine. if we went down, we were going down together. that we both knew.

aww. thats cute in a really really sad way haha.

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  • haha "i know we should keep moving but... his eyes.. i cant look away. they seem to melt me from the inside out, mesmerize me." haha that haooens to me sometimes too when i c pix. its 3 in the morning and ive been reading these since last nite and now im here and i cant wait 4 the next 1! POST SOON PLEASE!! amazing story u should make it into a book then into a movie haha i would totally read/watch it. haha <3333

  • Awnn I hope they make it through if Justin dies I am going to cry :(

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  • HEY IM IN MY ROOM ALONE AT 8:30 AT NIGHT KEEP THE FRIKIN VIOLENCE DOWN!!! :/

  • I LOVEJUSTIN BIEBER AND IWOULD LOVE TO MEET YOUI AM SPANISH AND OKALA TO COME TO SPAIN AND TO GO TO HER CONCERT AND WAPO

  • awwh!!! *tears*

  • @chelly723 i think we all will cry if justin dies hey that ryhmes haha i feel soo smart lolz

  • omigosh i've been reading your whole story for the whole day, you HAVE to put the nest one up soon! plz dont leave me in suspense! love it

  • thats was sooo cute :) NEXT PART NOW!!! LOL

  • So touching in a sad way... Why can't someone do that to me?! D:

  • Did you delete your Twitter?? Tweet...tweet...(those were special afects (; )

  • keep writing cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

    y is there no music?

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