Life School (Intern Show #2)

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This show was written, filmed, performed and edited by the interns. Please use the comments for your suggestions, advice and criticism. I promise they will read every one :)
Matzur's channel :: http://www.youtube.com/vidchatguys
Will's channel :: http://www.youtube.com/williamhaynestv

• Category

  Film & Animation

[eichenbaumAV]

Matzur has great things to say, but he needs to work on delivery. William is great in general. The lighting didn't seem to match in the jumps back and forth between the two guys, and that created a sort of subconscious discontinuity that tore the video apart slowly. I liked the writing, though.

[nightshadecat]

My favorite part was the computer screens.

[Arthropod108]

James Tiberius Haines... genius

[wolfboy12341]

herd words.... saw ducks....

[KristofskiKabuki]

I loved this :) Some feedback I would have though is that people very rarely look in one place when they're talking, when people are listening to someone they tend to look straight at them but when talking we tend to look around, and look at the other person for emphasis

[hellishkitteh]

LOL such a typical dude conversation. They aren't really talking to each other = the punchline. (I'm a level 58 life school graduate, but that's only because of the lessons THE MAN forced me to learn through FAILURE, lol-re: intern episode #1 hilarious!

Too bad the sarcastic-angry attitude was taken out. Maybe that kind of sarcasm is only understood by a specific group of people who "fail" more than others? failure not by their own fault so to speak. The 1st video seemed more "at ease" in a way

[CelesteofOz]

Both have good voices & lot of thought put into the material. Perhaps TOO much thought. It's like they're trying to get it so perfect, they can't relax. How about much shorter, more spontaneous work. You could try lots of little ones, (try in different locations) till you really get in you grove - then upload the best.

[MrDavidX96]

kinda depressing.

[Winged Angel]

HAHAHAHA.  Loved it!

[8musicmaker]

Right has realllly good words :) hilarious. Not to excited to were it seams fake :)

[SmilerTwoOhFour]

My mom would be SO mad.

[semt9]

Dang Philly D, Ze Frank...William Haynes sure knows how to go get an internship