two different worlds epi 1 (english DB)

so hier ist dir erste epi meiner neuen story.
ich habe keine music eingefügt, weil mir das zu gefährlich ist.
ich hab schon 2 strikes auf dem channel und da ich den
nicht verlieren will habe ich die music weggelassen!
könnt jaa eure eigene music an machen xD

fragen :
wie findet ihr sie ?
kann ich was bessa machen ?
soll ich überhaupt weiter machen ?

english :

in the school cafeteria
M: *takes a tablet and go get something to eat*
*sits down at an empty table*
V: * comes into the cafeteria and take something to eat *
* searches miley, finds her and runs to her *
Hey miles * smile *
M: * Think: -.- *
hey vany what's up?
V: will you go to the party tonight with me ?
M: *think* sure
when start it ?
V: great *smile* I'll pick you up around 7 o'clock
at miley's house
M: mum ? are you here ? *wait a minute ; /: * and again alone
*goes to her room*
7 o'clock
M: *rises in the car from vanessa* hey vany
V: *smile* you look great ; drive to the party *
at the party 2 hours later
M: *dance with a boy ; cell phone ringing*
what ?
T: what for a nice welcome
M: *o: * mum ?
T: *laugh* yeah it's me.
make we both us a comfortable weekend?
M: sure! I'm there in 15 minutes love you * hangs up*
V: *see that miley wants to go ; goes to her *
where you want to go?
M: home! my mum is finally here
V: * she looks on in disbelief * your kidding?!
M: no! go away and let me go * gets angry*
V: what will you make ... bitch ? *nasty smile*
M: *smile* this! *obtained the fist and punches her in the face*
monday afternoon
M: ... and when she saw me in school today
she has just nasty looked at me * starts to laugh *
D: * makes big eyes ; and starts to laugh *
great darling! so what should we do ? shoppen or cinema ?
M: *drinking from her cafe * cinema !
2 hours later
M: wow the film was great ! can you tomo.... * cell phone ringing*
who is there?
P: Miley ?
M: yeah ?!
P: here is the police
it is what happens
we must talk with you
M: uhm ok ... * hangs up* demi can you drive me home?
D: sure!
10 minutes later
D: we meet tomorrow ? *smile*
M: sure *smile ; gets out waiting until demi is gone;
running as fast as possible to her home *
P: Miley ?
M: yeah what's happens ?

how you find it ?

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[KatyMCFan]

Hammer geil :DD *-*

Weiter <3

[xArmsOfTheAngelx]

Hamma *-*

Ich finds toll so wie's ist und du musst unbedingt wieter machen :D

[FunkyKeksXD]

1. super

2. die ist perfekt!

3. MACH JA SCHNELL WEITER ODER ICH KILL DICH XD

[Julia13001]

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