Maria's 2nd Persuasive Speech!

Persuasive Speech #2

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People & Blogs

Tags:

• PGIC
• Pacific
• Gateway
• International
• College
• Victoria
• BC
• Canada
• ESL
• Advanced
• Power
• Speaking
• Josh
• persuasive
• speech

[nandocanada1]

you did a good job.

you had good eye contact, good knowledge about the topic, good exemples and good gestures.

But you might be careful with your band, somoetimes it went in front of your eyes making difficult to have eye contact.

But you took care about your speed and your volume.

you just looked to the paper twice and you were able to talke about your ideias without memorize.

[10Tomomi]

You didnt seem to be nervous, so it was natural. Your voice was loud enough and your speed was also easy to understand.

Besides, you were smiling all the time.

However I felt you tried to remember what you were supposed to say when you were speaking because you sometimes paused with an um sound.

On the other hand, you were getting natural and persuasive to speak as you have spoken for a long time.

[MAMI031027]

You stood in the same position. You always put your hands out. Your Spanish accents were sometimes too hard to listen and understand, especially th sound. You could look around everyone and you seemed to enjoy your presentation and you looked confident about it. Your voice was loud enough to listen and your pronunciation was very clear almost all the time. You used a good level vocabulary and your presentation was well organized. I really enjoyed your presentation.

[marifer911]

I did a good eye contact with almost everyone.

At the beginning I was moving so much.

I just looked at the paper a few times.

I looked at the ceiling when i didnt know what to say.

My speed was good.

I was kind of smiling so much at the beginning.

The volume that I used was right.

My voice was the same in all the speech.

The structure of the speech was right. I t was clear.

I mispronounced words that begin with TH like thing and though.

[rgedda11]

You had great eye contact with the audience and didn't look at your cue cards so much(a few time). I think you practiced enoughly You didn't speak quickly like you did before so it was easier to understand.

You stood with your hands out and also your elbows were too close to your body. Your body was shaking over and over like dancing. Because of those gestures, you didn't look comfortable. Great job!