Pretty Funny Women
Uploader Comments (JustJazzy3)
All Comments (30)
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For your very first performance I´d say it was okay. But I had the feeling that a lot of this stuff was too unrealistic to be true and funny, a little truth (for instance working with stereotypes) is the essence of comedy in my opinion. And you´re too good looking to be a comedian (It´s not supposed to be a compliment). If you look at most of the successfull comedians, they´re either funny, but still attractive looking, or just very "ordinary" or unattractive, but of course, win us with charme.
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Yeah, I think it was good. The material's ok, just the delivery needs some work - better pacing etc. but I bet that was because you were nervous anyway, so overall; Very good job :)
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don't smile and laugh at your own jokes so much, and speed up delivery for jokes that have foreshadowing...don't slow it down. i.e. "he pops the question..."
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"pretty attractive women thinking they're funny."
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wow, she is a little piece of eye candy!
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This was very funny, cute and I wish you good luck in your future tries!
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Overall not bad for a first time. The eating a condom part of your joke was awkward though. I think you could make it funnier. Also, wear more low cut shirts. Sex sells ;-)
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whoa.... wtf. awesome!! lol LMFAO!
GO GIRL!
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They don't make boobs big enough to make this at all funny.
Thank you! I was nervous so I was talking way too fast!
JustJazzy3 5 months ago